Paranoiah Posted March 27, 2008 Report Share Posted March 27, 2008 Everyone, I am VERY sorry if this isn't a good card. I am just starting out on this so just tell me things I need to fix plz. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted March 27, 2008 Report Share Posted March 27, 2008 Needs work on GRAMMAR! Thats mostly it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TAG Posted March 27, 2008 Report Share Posted March 27, 2008 Intersting. Pretty good concept. Too bad the OCG is bad. Oh well, I'm sure you can work on that. Get that right and the card will look more presentable. :D 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hanimir Posted March 27, 2008 Report Share Posted March 27, 2008 That one could be usefull in my Flower set XDOCG could be better but all in all good work ^^8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paranoiah Posted March 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2008 Thanks a-lot everyone. I appreciate all that was said here and I will work on my grammar much more. xD I extremely thank you for the ratings. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted March 27, 2008 Report Share Posted March 27, 2008 I believe this effect will help you. At the End Phase of each players turn, increase both players Life Points by 300. Also, increase the DEF of all Plant-Type monsters by 1000 and decrease the ATK by 400. Put your own uniqness into this card :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paranoiah Posted March 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2008 Kk I re-did the Emerald Dream card and added a new one. :) and thanks for the tip Sasukechidori58 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted March 27, 2008 Report Share Posted March 27, 2008 Kk I re-did the Emerald Dream card and added a new one. :) and thanks for the tip Sasukechidori58 also dont write anything else than the card effect. youll become a great card maker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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