The Wanderer & Cthulhu

[Jesus]

Ok.. Here is my finished card set (Yay) It's my first one. Go Me. Ok.. There is a few things I don't like about this and those are :

-Spelling/Grammer Errors - And I mean quite a few..

-My First Card Set (Thats gunna get me less rateings D:)

-Some are overpowered, but this deck is mainly about Life Points for Attack Points & Summoning

-This set isen't a deck.. leaves room for real cards, like Heavy Storm, Mystical Space Typhoon, Premature Burial, Lightning Vortex, ect. Also with "Cthulhu's Call of Hell".. It's Special Summoned from your Hand or Deck. Not the Graveyard.

 

Please ignore any spelling/grammer errors... If the effect is completly unreadable because of it, I'll fix it for you, but otherwise don't complain about it. My Rating, I'd say 8/10 because of Grammer Errors and A lil bit overpowered. I wanna see what YOURS is.

 

[Jesus]

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[T-Moow]

i like the cards, but some have a white background.. better replace those images.

[Jesus]

Ok A few things..

1. I can't find ANY good pictures for those On the folowing : Deviant, Yahoo, Dogpile, and Google. Those were the best ones there, So I can't replace those.

2. You didn't even rate the cards out of 10, you just said you liked them.

[T-Moow]

7/10, still because of the white backgrounds

[Jesus]

I don't think it would matter if a card had a white background or not. Princess Pekuru, the card for a princess deck, has a white background, and yet it is still used.

[Jesus]

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[Jesus]

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[Astro Dude]

OOooooooook. Your cards are a little gothic, but they're somewhat better than mine. You get a 24/10, for great use of norse mythology.

 

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[Jesus]

:D Yeah. My Cards are Gothic because well I am Goth. You would see in my avatar.. But I can't make one T_T. Anyway, Cthulhu is basiclly just a Kraken.. I don't feel like putting Satan because this is my Satan Card:

 

 

;D That card is the awesomeness.

[Jesus]

Renewing Topic >.< People post too much!

[Jesus]

......Renewing topic yet again. Sigh..

[Jesus]

I posted here cuz' I can.

[Lucas Maximus]

Eh, good cards, I guess. >_>

Just improve on the overall quality and uniqueness of the card images and effects a little. Your OCG is a little off also, but I know your aware of that.

So, on the contrary, these cards ain't bad, I can see you have put a lot of effort into them. =D

I hope to see more from you in future days. Well done.

7.8/10

[Jesus]

:D Thanks

[Jesus]

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[CrazyKev]

Bunches of OCG errors, but I won't point them out 'cause there's so many and I can tell you put a lot of effort in the effects

So pictures aren't that good

7.5/10

[Jesus]

;D yay

[Jesus]

Bumpage.

[Astro Dude]

To Woon.

 

Ahh. I see. Keep up the good work.

[Soapman]

Nice cards, would be better if there were more weaker versions of the wander. like a squire or something. Like you said they are way too overpowered.

Grammars not too bad...

The Massive group summon Spell cards should hurt you ALOT more than they do and not return your life points back to you. If someone spontaneously summoned 3-4 cards with multiple summoning spell cards on the first turn they pretty much win.

You tried not to overpower them I will give you credit for that. but some of those level four monsters need to be level 5. If a card has 1700+ ATK or DEF and a positive effect then it needs to be level 5.

Some of your pictures worked perfectly, but if you see a picture thats black and white or has no Background, Don't use that picture.

 

6.5/10

 

(P.S. I like how you used the Kilgoron for the Wander's Blade. LoL)