Nasuverse Set

[AllHailAugusta]

Hi all! I've been creating cards with the card maker for some time, but just now started using an account.

The reason of this topic is to get an opinion on an ongoing set of cards based on the Nasuverse. If I could have a sincere critic about how to improve them, or your general opinion on them, I would be really happy. 

 

A warning tough: 

 

Spoilers!. In case of servants and abilities, I use their true name followed by their title (Example, the first card of the set, "Gilgamesh, King of All Heroes"). Some of these names are plot-important and are revealed rather late in the Visual Novel/Novel/Whatsoever. So, again, Spoiler Warning.


So, lets begin!

 

Gilgamesh, King of All Heroes



Gate of Babylon

 

 

(The effect of the card is based on the effect of Gate of Babylon, which allows instant acces to the armory/treasurery of Gilgamesh, allowing him to pull any weapon/armor/shield he wants. This even applies to his other treasures, like wine)

Enkidu, The Chains of Heaven

 

 

(In the Visual Novels these chains restrain anyone, the higher the divinity of the target, the stronger the chain gets. For example, for a simple human they would have the strength of a really hard chain. For someone like Heracles, or other demigods, they are nigh unbreakable. Since this would be hard to apply in the cards, I decided to have just a stop and restrain effect)

Ea, Sword of Rupture

 

 

Enuma Elish

 

 

(Enuma Elish is a EX Rank (the highest posible) Anti-World Type (The strongest possible) Noble Phantasm. Altough technically Ea is the noble phantasm, the technique of the sword is the one that generally gets it's own name. It can literally destroy dimensions if used at full power, thats why it destroys all cards on the enemy side of the field without posibility of being blocked/stopped)

EMIYA, The Wrought Iron Hero

 

As for now, these are all. As I create more I'll update the post.

Again, I hope to hear your opinions/criticism!

[Blue Amoonguss]

Ah, nasuverse cards. The cards themselves aren't that impressive, they're lacking a lot of effects that might suit them; also, I get the 50 LP cost as the mana cost to sustain them, but it seems unnecessary in a card game like this. Also, the last line in the Gate of Babylon card isn't needed, as long as the card is a continuous spell, since it would be treated like Ultimate Offering; as long as you can pay the price, you can get the card. The effects of Enkidu seems lame, as it can easily be replaced by Fiendish Chain. I'd say Enuma Elish is not that balanced; for a cost of a meager 2000 Life, you can wipe the field with no one being able to stop you. If I were Gilgamesh, I'd probably demand every single Life Point, and leave you at 1, with a minimum cost of 3000+. The effect's that good, and he's nigh indestructible with Ea equipped, which just makes him broken. Which is rather fitting for him, now that I think about it. 

 

Anyway, I would like to see the Summoning Spell spell card itself, as well as an adaptation of Unlimited Blade Works.