Rawlyn Posted March 27, 2008 Report Share Posted March 27, 2008 Hope you all like. Comments/ratings? (I don't own the artwork). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted March 27, 2008 Report Share Posted March 27, 2008 The effect is a little basic, but good effort. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 27, 2008 Report Share Posted March 27, 2008 As this is your first card tis quite nice. ^_^I don't really like the image though, its just not Yu-Gi-Oh like.You have OCG errors in your card effect also:card's doesn't need an apostrophe. I'm not sure the cards effect is worded right either, it looks a little off to me. Still, as stated, for a first card, good job. I hope to see more from you in future days. =D7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stoneweasel Posted March 28, 2008 Report Share Posted March 28, 2008 DEF not DefenseI Disagree' date=' DEF is used when referring to the DEF Points, Defence is used when referring to position (go check on some real cards, I have). card's doesn't need an apostrophe.Yes it does as it is used in a possessive context i.e. referring to the battle position belonging to that card. I'm not sure the cards effect is worded right either' date=' it looks a little off to me.[/quote'] really? I find that rather interesting, I would say it is worded exactly as you would expect a real card to be worded The Graphic is a bit off though SW P.S. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawlyn Posted April 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 Thanks for the responses - very useful information from everyone! I hope to see more of me here too ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 if this is your first thin your very good, basic but it's very good if your still new to card making. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawlyn Posted April 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 It's my first posted, but as you can see from the card number it's my 18th card made :P The others aren't really worth posting :) Thanks for the encouragement though! Making cards with this tool rocks ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 This is a copy of Goblin Attack Force, so i will not give you a high rating because of that. I give it an A. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawlyn Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Well done Diedra, you spotted the deliberate rip off! Fame and glory for you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 i dont think this is the best u can do ? 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stoneweasel Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 The fact it is clearly an exact rip off of Goblin attack force is why I found this comment so amusing! I'm not sure the cards effect is worded right either' date=' it looks a little off to me. [/quote'] Genius! I was just waiting to see if anyone else came out with any other comments as brilliant. SW Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 5.715 / 10. Good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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