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Experiment no 23


shonenhikada

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card lore :

This card's type is treated as a Machine and Warrior-Type monster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 Warrior-Type monster, 1 Machine-Type monster and 1 Beast-Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard. The original ATK of this card becomes equal to the combined original ATK of the monsters that were removed from play. Your opponent cannot activate Trap Cards during the Battle Phase while this cards on the field.

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A little overpowered in my opinion. I think it would be fairer without the secondary effect of your opponent not being able to activate traps in the battle phase.

 

None too bad effort though, a lot more realistic than a lot of cards posted on this forum.

 

8/10 (without the secondary effect it would have got 9/10).

 

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"Beast Warrior" no hyphen.

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 Warrior-Type monster, 1 Machine-Type monster and 1 Beast Warrior-Type monster in your Graveyard. The original ATK of this card becomes equal to the combined original ATK of the monsters that were removed from play.This card is also treated as Machine and Warrior-Type. While this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot activate Trap Cards during your(the) Battle Phase."

 

Ok, I switched the sentences around a little, and I think it sounds better that way since you should always have the summoning requirements first. There were a few grammar errors that I also fixed. I have "the" in parenthesis because I wasn't sure if you wanted him to negate traps in both player's battle phases, or just yours. So, depending on which you want you can pick one word or the other :P

 

overall - 12.54/13.69 ^_^

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