Cosmo. Posted November 20, 2014 Report Share Posted November 20, 2014 This is my first archetype,i was inspired by ice barriers, monarchs, talaya the princess of cherry blossoms, queen of the night, and a league of legends skin (i used it for Mystic), but they are based on tribute summoning and maybe in the future i'll add more support for them, since i'm really liking them. Almost every artwork comes from pinterest (except the mystic), i'm so sorry but i forgot the names of the respective artists. Welp i wanna hear your feedback on it. Please tell me if the ocg is bad or they are too op. I wanna get better at making cards. :lol: Also i'm a noob with spoilers. So here are the cards: [spoiler=''][/spoiler] Dancer of The Order of the Lotus: level 3 WIND atk 1300 def 800 Spellcaster Once per turn you can discard this card from your hand, add 1"The Order of the Lotus" card from your deck to your hand. If this card is sent to the graveyard, you can target 1 card in your hand, put that target on the bottom of your deck; add this card from your graveyard to your hand. [spoiler=''][/spoiler] Fish Princess of The Order of the Lotus: level 2 WATER atk 200 def 400 Fish If you control a Tribute Summoned "The Order of the Lotus" monster; you can Special Summon this card from your graveyard, you cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn you activate this effect. Once per turn if this card is tributed for the Tribute Summon of a "The Order of the Lotus" monster, you can draw 1 card. [spoiler=''][/spoiler] Herbalist of The Order of the Lotus: level 6 WIND atk 0 def 1800 Spellcaster As long as 1 or more other "The Order of the Lotus" monsters are face-up on the field; this card cannot be targeted by battle or by card effects. Whenever you tribute summon a "The Order of the Lotus" monster; you can decrease that monster's atk by 500 to draw 1 card. [spoiler=''][/spoiler] Mermaid Soldier of The Order of the Lotus: level 4 WATER atk 2000 def 0 Sea-Serpent Once per turn you can tribute this card to Special Summon a level 5 or 6 "The Order of the Lotus" monster from your hand to your side of the field (This Special Summon is treated as a Tribute Summon). If this card is sent to the graveyard; you can Special Summon a level 4 or lower "The Order of the Lotus" monster from your deck to your side of the field, that monster is destroyed during the End Phase. [spoiler=''][/spoiler] Mystic of The Order of the Lotus: level 6 WATER atk 100 def 3000 Spellcaster This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card must be Special Summoned by tributing two Tribute Summoned "The Order of the Lotus" monsters. Once per turn you can Tribute Summon a "The Order of the Lotus" monster without tributing any monsters. If this card is sent to the graveyard by battle or by a card effect; you can banish 2 "Order of the Lotus" monsters from your hand and/or graveyard to Special Summon this card from your graveyard. [spoiler=''][/spoiler] Researcher of The Order of the Lotus: level 6 WATER atk 1100 def 2400 Spellcaster If this card is Tribute Summoned by tributing a "The Order of the Lotus" monster; you can add a "The Order of the Lotus" monster from your deck to your hand. If this card leaves the field; you can Special Summon from your graveyard the monster tributed for the Tribute Summon of this card, and then it becomes the End Phase of this turn. [spoiler=''][/spoiler] Secret Garden of The Order of the Lotus: Field Spell As long as this card remains face-up on the field: All Tribute Summoned "The Order of the Lotus" monsters that you control cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn: when a "The Order of the Lotus" monster is tributed for the Tribute Summon of a "The Order of The Lotus" monster; you can add a level 6 or higher "The Order of the Lotus" monster from your deck to your hand. [spoiler=''][/spoiler] Supreme Empress of The Order of the Lotus: rank 6 LIGHT atk 2700 def 2300 Spellcaster 2 level 6 "The Order of the Lotus" monsters As long as this card is face-up on the field, neither player can Special Summon any monsters. If this card would be destroyed, you can detach 2 Xyz materials from this card instead. Once per turn you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card, this turn you can Tribute Summon "The Order of the Lotus" monsters without tributing any monsters. [spoiler=''][/spoiler] Waterfall of The Order of the Lotus: Continuous spell card Each "The Order of the Lotus" monster you control gains 500 atk for each Tribute Summoned monster on the field. If this card you control is sent from the field to the graveyard; you can add 1 "The Order of the Lotus" monster from your graveyard to your hand. [spoiler=''][/spoiler] Garden of The Order of the Lotus: Continuous Spell Card Twice per turn when a "The Order of the Lotus" monster is tributed for the Tribute Summon of a "The Order of the Lotus" monster, you can Normal Summon/Set a "The Order of the Lotus" monster in addition to you Normal Summon/Set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thegreatmightypoo Posted November 20, 2014 Report Share Posted November 20, 2014 I like it well enough. There's nothing particularly amazing about it though. Archetypes based on tributing have already been done before in the actual yugioh game, so it isn't adding anything really unique. And yes, Empress is REALLY broken. Not allowing your opponent to special summon while itself being a really strong card is really stupid, especially with it's card effect protection. A few OCG errors, there are times where you put commas where there should be periods, like Special Summon this card from your graveyard, you cannot conduct your Battle Phase the turn There should be a period instead of a comma, as those are two separate statements, unless you want to put "and" there instead of the comma. You also separated effects into paragraphs. That's something you definitely never do. The only time an effect is not one long paragraph is when you're separating them into separate effects like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cosmo. Posted November 23, 2014 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2014 I like it well enough. There's nothing particularly amazing about it though. Archetypes based on tributing have already been done before in the actual yugioh game, so it isn't adding anything really unique. And yes, Empress is REALLY broken. Not allowing your opponent to special summon while itself being a really strong card is really stupid, especially with it's card effect protection. A few OCG errors, there are times where you put commas where there should be periods, like There should be a period instead of a comma, as those are two separate statements, unless you want to put "and" there instead of the comma. You also separated effects into paragraphs. That's something you definitely never do. The only time an effect is not one long paragraph is when you're separating them into separate effects like Thanks a lot for the opinions, i just nerfed a lot the empress. I will create sooner or later (i need to find cool images) a new archetype, and i will try to do my best, following your suggestions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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