"Dorian" Archetype (8 cards)

[MyTomorrow77]

Still learning things because I'm a newbie, but last time I received some very helpful feedback. In particular, the card grammar of the first sentence of this set has been bothering me. This archetype (and an additional card to help it) is based off Dorian, a monster that reincarnates itself until it reaches perfection. I'm hoping to create more cards that are based on multiple monster attributes. Let me know what you think.