demonlord426 Posted January 3, 2015 Report Share Posted January 3, 2015 Master Thief of Demon World Raijo Monster Card DARK/Beast-Warrior/Effect Level 2 300/550 FLIP:Draw two cards from your deck, then discard any two cards from your hand. Fell Priest of Demon World Ayumi Monster Card DARK/Spellcaster/Effect Level 3 800/400 When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, until the end of the turn, any decrease to your Life Points as a result of battle becomes an increase. You can discard this card from your hand in response to a card effect that inflicts 500 or more damage to your Life Points to negate the effect and increase your Life Points by the amount of damage you would have taken. This effect is Spell Speed 3. Blade Knight of Demon World Kaguro Monster Card DARK/Warrior/Effect Level 4 1500/1800 If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing battle damage to your opponent, and if you do, destroy the opponent's monster without activating its effect. Soul-Absorbing Fanatic of Demon World Hatachi Monster Card DARK/Fiend/Effect Level 4 1000/1000 Before damage calculation, if this card attacks a Defense Position monster; Destroy that monster. If this card destroys an Attack Position monster as a result of battle, increase this card's ATK/DEF by 200. Wicked Enchantress of Demon World Sumia Monster Card DARK/Fiend/Tuner/Effect Level 5 1500/2200 As long as this card is face up on the field, monsters your opponent controls can only target this card for battle. If this card is attacked while in defense position by a monster with ATK that is lower than this card's DEF, destroy the opponent's attacking monster after damage calculation. Vile Plant of Demon World Lv 5 Monster Card DARK/Plant/Effect Level 5 2000/500 Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by 'Carnivorous Plant Trap Hole' and cannot be Special Summoned in other ways. This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly. When this card inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points as a result of battle with a monster, it gains an additional attack. You can only activate this effect once per turn. During theEnd Phase of your turn when this card attacks twice, you can tribute it to SpecialSummon 1 'Vile Plant of Demon World Lv 7' from your hand or deck. Vile Plant of Demon World Lv 7 Monster Card DARK/Plant/Effect Level 7 3000/1500 Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by 'Vile Plant of Demon World Lv 5', and cannot be Special Summoned in other ways. This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly except by its effect. When this card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle during your Battle Phase, it can attack your opponent's Life Points directly with half of its current ATK. During the End Phase of your turn where this card attacks your opponent's Life Points directly, you can tribute it to Special Summon 1 'Vile Plant of Demon World Lv 9' from your hand or deck. Vile Plant of Demon World Lv 9 Monster Card DARK/Plant/Effect Level 9 4500/2200 Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by 'Vile Plant of Demon World Lv 7', and cannot be Special Summoned in other ways.. This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly except by its effect. After destroying an opponent's monster as a result of battle during your turn, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly at half strength. When this card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle, you can add half of the destroyed monster's ATK to this card's ATK until the End Phase of the current turn. During the End Phase of your turn where this card attacks your opponent's Life Points directly, you can tribute this card to Special Summon 'Vile Plant of Demon World Lv 12' from your hand or deck. Vile Plant of Demon World Lv 12 Monster Card DARK/Plant/Effect Level 12 ?/? Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by 'Vile Plant of Demon World Lv 9'. This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly. When this card is Special Summoned, you can banish all monster cards in your Graveyard. This card's ATK/DEF is equal to the number of banished monster cards on the field x200. Once per turn, you can pick up and look at the top five cards in your deck and banish every monster card you pick up by this effect, to banish the same number of monsters that your opponent controls and then inflict 300 Life Points of damage for each card banished by this effect. Ruthless General of Demon World Ryushen Monster Card DARK/Warrior/Effect Level 10 4200/3500 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of 'Savage King of Demon World Akihiro'. As long as this card remains face up on your side of the field, other monsters with 'Demon World in their name cannot be destroyed (damage calculation is still applied through battle.) When this card is destroyed by battle, instead of sending it to the graveyard, banish it. Savage King of Demon World Akihiro Monster Card DARK/Warrior/Synchro/Effect Level 11 5000/4000 Wicked Enchantress of Demon World Sumia + 1 or more non-Tuner Monsters During your main phase, you can tribute two level 4 or higher monsters with 'Demon World' in their name on your side of the field to Special Summon 'Ruthless General of Demon World Ryushen'. During your turn, when this card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle, this card can attack again. You may only activate this effect once per turn. Almighty Goddess of Demon World Kageyumi Monster Card Dark/Fiend/Effect Level 12 0/0 Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by Tributing a face up 'Savage Kind of Demon World Akihiro' and 'Ruthless General of Demon World Ryushen', and cannot be Special Summoned in other ways.. Monsters with 'Demon World' in their name on your side of the field cannot be destroyed. Legion of Demon World Spell Card You can choose to activate one of these effects.. ●Discard one card from your hand to search you deck for a level 3 or lower monster with 'Demon World' in its name and Special Summon it in face up attack or face down defense position. ●Pay 1000 Life Points to search your deck for a level 4 or higher monster with 'Demon World' in its name, and Special Summon it in face up attack or defense position. Carnivorous Plant Trap Hole Trap Card (Counter) When an opponent's monster attacks a monster with 'Demon World in its name that you control that is occupying the monster card zone in front of this card, destroy the opponent's monster and inflict damage to your opponent's life points equal to half of the destroyed monster's ATK, then you can tribute the monster that was targeted to Special Summon one 'Vile Plant of Demon World Lv 5' from your hand or deck to the field. Raijo's Secret Stash Spell Card (Quick-Play)You can only activate this card when there is a face up 'Master Thief of Demon World Raijo' on your side of the field. Place all cards in your hand at the bottom of your deck and draw five cards. Shuffle your deck afterward. Sword of Endless Abyss Spell Card (Equip) This card can only be equipped to 'Almighty Goddess of Demon World Kageyumi'. If there is not a 'Kageyumi's Meditation Circle' on your side of the field when this card is placed face up on your side of the field, this card is destroyed. A monster equipped with this card increases its ATK by 2000. When a monster equipped with this card attacks an opponent's defense position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of a monster equipped with this card, inflict the difference as damage to your opponent's Life Points. Shield of Swelling Shadow Spell Card (Equip) This card can only be equipped to 'Almighty Goddess of Demon World Kageyumi'. If there is not a 'Kageyumi's Meditation Circle' on your side of the field when this card is placed face up on your side of the field, this card is destroyed. A monster equipped with this card increases its DEF by 2000. When an opponent's monster attacks a defense position monster equipped with this card, you can place this card in the graveyard from your side of the field to negate the attack and destroy the attacking monster. Kageyumi's Meditation Circle Spell Card (Continuous) If there is not a face up 'Almighty Goddess of Demon World Kageyumi' on your side of the field when you activate this card, destroy this card. When 'Almighty Goddess of Demon World Kageyumi' is removed from your side of the field, destroy this card. As long as this card remains face up on your side of the field, negate the effect of a face up 'Almighty Goddess of Demon World Kageyumi' that you control. At the End Phase of your third turn after this card has been activated, if it is still in play, you win the duel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drakoron_99 Posted January 3, 2015 Report Share Posted January 3, 2015 I quite like this set because of its effects and playstyle, but its faults are huge. Let's begin. Kaguro's effect is quite confusing. When this attack position card battles with an opponents defense position card whose DEF is lower than this card's ATK, destroy the opponent's monster (disregarding its effect) and inflict the difference as damage to your opponent's life points. What difference? You need to make this effect clearer. Hatachi's effect also has this problem: Face down defense position monsters destroyed by this card are not flipped face up. Face-down monsters are already flipped face-up when attacked, what is the point of this effect? Not sure if I'm wrong, but when it says on Vile Plant LV5's effect "When this card has attacked twice", does that mean you have to attack exactly twice? Also, where do you Special Summon Lv7 from? Your hand, Graveyard or Deck? (This also counts for Lv9 and Lv12) All the other cards I have not mentioned are quite good, but you need to improve a little bit on your OCG. Check out Zaziuma's post on how to do that: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/322020-ocgpsct-thread-writing-your-card-properly/ Also, if you dig through the forums, you may find more of these, maybe shorter ones perhaps :P Otherwise, great seeing more content from you. Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
demonlord426 Posted January 3, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2015 I think the confusion came about because I worded actual effects from other cards in such a way that they sounded confusing and wrong. Take a look at my edits (I'm sure you'll be able to tell the difference.) If it helps, great. If not then perhaps a different approach is required. While I'm thinking about it, I completely changed Hatachi's effect because the first effect as I envisioned it was Drillroid's effect, but adding a 200 ATK/DEF boost whenever he destroyed a monster; even through that effect, was well into OP territory. Therefore, the buff effect only activates for monsters destroyed by Hatachi, NOT his effect. And obviously I added to the 'Vile Plant of Dark World' Lvs 5, 7, and 9 the 'from your hand or deck' that I was thinking of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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