Burning Abyss Fusion

[razzy]

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2 Level 3 monsters

Must first Fusion Summoned. You cannot Special Summon monster's, except "Burning Abyss" monsters. While this card is face-up on the field, "Burning Abyss" monsters, other than "Beatrice, Rescuer of the Burning Abyss " you control cannot be targeted or destroyed by card effects. If this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard: You can target up to 3 other "Burning Abyss" cards in your Graveyard; shuffle them into the Deck.

- Now requires a Fusion Spell

- No longer protects from battle

- Stats lowered a little (totaling 3500, the same as Dante and Virgil)

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[spoiler=Version 1]

2 Level 3 monsters

Must first be Special Summoned (From your Extra Deck) by sending the above the cards you control to the Graveyard. (You do not use "Polymerization"). You cannot Special Summon monster's, except "Burning Abyss" monsters. "Burning Abyss" monsters you control are not destroyed be their own effects. Your opponent cannot target other "Burning Abyss" monsters for attacks or with card effects, except "Beatrice, Rescuer of the Burning Abyss". If this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard: You can target up to 3 other "Burning Abyss" cards in your Graveyard; shuffle them into the Deck.

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May work on making a few other (main deck) monsters and/or an actual fusion spell needed for it. But for now just wanted to post this to see what people thought and to help me come up with more ideas.

 

Any question or comments feel free to post/ask :D

[Progenitor]

Well the flavor might be off considering that every BA Monster is a reference to a character in Inferno.

 

This card is absurd.

• Protects your BA?  Check
• 1 card Extra Deck Monster if you use Tour guide?  Check
• 1, potentially 2 BA card effects off the summon? Check
• A stupid amount of combined attack and defense for a contact level 6 fusion? Check
• Attack stun and target stun if you get out 2 of them, which you can easily do? Check
• A free Michael effect on a deck that almost mills as much as lightsworn? Check

I see where you were trying to go with this, but this needs work.  

• You need to drop either the target clause or the attack clause, cuz having both makes it so the only way your opponent can touch you if you get 2 of these out, which you can easily do with Cir, is card effects that don't target OR, make it "Once per turn, when your opponent targets a 'Burning Abyss' monster for an attack or a card effect; You can negate the attack or effect."
• Lower it's overall stats, especially its defense.  Look at El Shaddoll Wendigo.  It has significantly less protective ability, it's not a contact fusion, and it's stat total is 3000, while your wall of a fusion has a stat total of 4300
• The first effect is....fine for now, as it also stops you from crashing you own monster's with their effects, but this clause could still be abused.  The self destruction aspect of BA is one of the few natural balances the deck has.  Removing it removes the balance.  I would find a way to limit it's usefulness slightly somehow.
• If you do the above, the last effect is fine, though I would add "You can only use this effect of 'Beatrice, Rescuer of the Burning Abyss' once per turn" to prevent looping.

Hope this helped.

[razzy]

Beatrice was once Dante's fiance. Actually had thoughts of making her a spirit, but just wanted to get some general ideas of how a fusion may work.

It does not create a lock by having two of them out. Since it reads other "Beatrice".

Although it does protect them from their self destruct effects it also makes it so you can only Special Summon BA monsters.

I probably should lower it's ATK/DEF. 

And I meant to add the once per turn clause on it but kinda forgot.

A fusion spell is also in the works so the contact fusion will probably be removed.