CaleTucker Posted January 21, 2015 Report Share Posted January 21, 2015 First time posting, and I do hope I make this post correctly from my understandings of the rules. I first created this set in 2010, and over the years I have realized just how stupid, and stupidly overpowered they were... especially considering I was taking my time and being serious when I first made them. Here is the final result. [spoiler=Keeper of Balance (Set)][spoiler=Forbidden Sanctuary] Forbidden Sanctuary Ritual Spell This card is used to Ritual Summon "Neveras, The Angelic Demon". You must also Tribute monsters from the field to the graveyard whose total levels equal 9 or more. If this card is removed from the field, the owner takes 1000 points of damage to their Life Points. When "Neveras, The Angelic Demon" is summoned; Spells and Traps can not be activated this turn.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Forbidden Scroll] Forbidden Scroll Quick-Play Spell Look at up to 5 cards from the top of your Deck, then place them on the top of the Deck in any order. This card is treated as a Light or Dark monster in the Graveyard.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Neveras True Sword] Trap Target 1 face-up "Neveras, The Angelic Demon"; equip this card to that target. While equipped, if the equipped monster would be targeted by a Spell, Trap, or monster effect, destroy this card and negate the effect.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Released Bonds] Released Bonds Field Spell All Light and Dark monsters gain 200 ATK and DEF. If "Neveras, The Angelic Demon" is on the field, it loses 2000 DEF and gains 200 ATK.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Neveras, The Angelic Demon] Neveras, The Angelic Demon Divine/9/Fairy/Ritual/Effect 2800/3000 You must Ritual Summon this card with "Forbidden Sanctuary". This card can not attack unless "Released Bonds" is on the field. When this card is summoned this way: You can target 1 card on the field and destroy it. This card gains effects by how many Light and Dark monsters are in the owners graveyard. - 3 Light; Can not be targeted by Spells. - 3 Dark; Can not be targeted by Traps.[/spoiler][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PixelCat Posted January 25, 2015 Report Share Posted January 25, 2015 Three things that come up with this: 1:Forbidden Sanctuary What do you mean by "when this card is removed from the field"? It's a Ritual Card, thus when it is used it automatically get's removed from the field. So are you saying if the card is used to summon your monster, you take 1k damage automatically? 2:Neveras' True Sword Why is it a trap instead of an Equip card? Is it so you cannot use it on your own turn on purpose? 3:Neveras, the angelic demon She doesn't seem like she is of much help other than defense. Her effect is not quite good enough to make the trouble worthwhile. Targeted, meh. Uneffected... worth it. It doesn't break the card in any way as it's hard to get out, as well as having so many restrictions for the effect in the first place. Also, on that note, change "3 LIGHT" to "3 or more LIGHT" otherwise it is hit or miss. Otherwise, simple yet effective. I like seeing a new take on Ritual monsters that are not stupidly good. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaleTucker Posted February 2, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2015 Three things that come up with this: 1:Forbidden Sanctuary What do you mean by "when this card is removed from the field"? It's a Ritual Card, thus when it is used it automatically get's removed from the field. So are you saying if the card is used to summon your monster, you take 1k damage automatically? 2:Neveras' True Sword Why is it a trap instead of an Equip card? Is it so you cannot use it on your own turn on purpose? 3:Neveras, the angelic demon She doesn't seem like she is of much help other than defense. Her effect is not quite good enough to make the trouble worthwhile. Targeted, meh. Uneffected... worth it. It doesn't break the card in any way as it's hard to get out, as well as having so many restrictions for the effect in the first place. Also, on that note, change "3 LIGHT" to "3 or more LIGHT" otherwise it is hit or miss. Otherwise, simple yet effective. I like seeing a new take on Ritual monsters that are not stupidly good. XD 1. Yes, which means if it is placed on the field, and a card is activated to destroy it while face down in any way, the player also takes a thousand. 2. It is a surprise-use card. Plain and simple. Especially usable if the required effects of Neveras are not met. Which can give an opening 3. Released bonds gives attack and defense to Light and Dark monsters on the field and also makes Neveras' attack 3000 points, taking away their defense but allowing them to attack. In the end Neveras may almost be invincible, at least for one turn, if the trap card had not been used as of yet. However, I do agree the wording should be changed to "3 or more." Side note: Neveras is a male. Other Info: I did not want the set to match the current style of dueling. I wanted something towards back a few years. All this XYZ and other stuff I feel is venturing out of the original YGO style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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