cloud strife card.

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this is my new card that i made while a sad song was playing soo.

and if you see any OCG or grammer plz tell me what it is.

 

 

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[72night]

First of all.. this is the Finish Cards/Set, so how is 1 card a set?.. So, wrong section. >.>

 

Now here is the OCG errors..

 

1. Obviously the first OCG is the name.. Cloud Strife not cloud strife. Names must be capitalized, that's English.. so ya..

2. [Warrior / Effect] not [warrior / Effect], it's English to capitalize the beginning of a sentence..

3. Normal Summoned not normal summoned.

4. Set not set.

5. Special Summoned not special summoned.

6. Special Summon not special summon.

7. Spell Card or Spell card not spell card.

8. "Cloud's City of Memories" not " Cloud's City Of Memories".

9. Graveyard not graveyard.

10. This not this.

11. cannot not can not.

12. This card cannot be Normal Summoned, Set, or Special Summoned. Not. this card can not be normal summoned set or special summoned.

13. This not this.

14. Special Summoned not special summon.

15. This card can only be Special Summoned due to the effect of "Cloud's City of Memories". Not. this card can only be special summon by the effect of spell card " Cloud's City Of Memories".

15. By sending this card from the field to the Graveyard, the duel ends in a draw. Not. by sending this card to the graveyard end this duel with a draw.

 

>_>

 

The effect matches what you'd feel if you were listening to a sad song, but the effect is a bit boring to me.

The pic isn't horrible, but it can use a background.

As you can see, you had OCG errors on every place you'd have words except on the Att, preset Effect, Circulation, ID, Year, and Creator.

 

Overall: 3.2/10, for some amount of effect.. But please, try harder..

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thx man i will remake the card. and post it thx agian for the effort of writing all this