Lumin567 Posted February 8, 2015 Report Share Posted February 8, 2015 OK. Good archetype attempt two. Game face on. Here we go. [spoiler='Monsters'] You can special summon this card from your hand. When you special summon this card, gain 400 life points for every card in your banished zone. Lose 1000 life points whenever you special summon an unstable monster. This card cannot be used as an XYZ material, except for the XYZ summon of an Unstable monster. This card cannot be used as synchro material. Put one flux counter on this card during your end phase. This card loses 1000 ATK and DEF for every flux counter on it. When this card leaves the field, banish it. This card cannot be normal summoned or set. You can special summon this card from your hand. When you special summon this card, choose another Unstable monster you control. It is unaffected by card effects until the end phase Pay 1000 life points whenever you special summon an Unstable monster, except one summoned by this card's effect. This card cannot be used as an XYZ material, except for the XYZ summon of an Unstable monster. Put one flux counter on this card during your end phase. This card loses 1000 ATK and DEF for every flux counter on it. When this card leaves the field or is ever in your graveyard, banish it. You can special summon this card from your hand. When you special summon this card, you may tribute a monster you control to banish any card on the field, and this card gains 500 ATK if you do. Lose 1000 life points whenever you special summon an unstable monster. This card cannot be used as an XYZ material, except for the XYZ summon of an Unstable monster. This card cannot be used as synchro material. Put one flux counter on this card during your end phase. This card loses 1000 ATK and DEF for every flux counter on it. When this card leaves the field, banish it. You can special summon this card from your hand. When you special summon this card, target monster loses 1000 ATK and is changed to attack position. Lose 1000 life points whenever you special summon an unstable monster. This card cannot be used as an XYZ material, except for the XYZ summon of an Unstable monster. This card cannot be used as synchro material. Put one flux counter on this card during your end phase. This card loses 1000 ATK and DEF for every flux counter on it. When this card leaves the field, banish it. You can special summon this card from your hand. When you special summon this card, you may shuffle up to two cards from your hand into your deck, and add one Unstable monster from your deck to your hand for every card shuffled into your deck this way. Lose 1000 life points whenever you special summon an unstable monster. This card cannot be used as an XYZ material, except for the XYZ summon of an Unstable monster. This card cannot be used as synchro material. Put one flux counter on this card during your end phase. This card loses 1000 attack and defense for every flux counter on it. When this card leaves the field, banish it. You can special summon this card from your hand. When you special summon this card, destroy one spell or trap your opponent controls. Lose 1000 life points whenever you special summon an unstable monster. This card cannot be used as an XYZ material, except for the XYZ summon of an Unstable monster. This card cannot be used as synchro material. Put one flux counter on this card during your end phase. This card loses 1000 ATK and DEF for every flux counter on it. When this card leaves the field, banish it. This card cannot be normal summoned or set. You can special summon this card from your hand.If you do, you may special summon another Unstable monster from your hand. Lose 1000 life points whenever you special summon an Unstable monster, except one summoned by this card's effect. This card cannot be used as an XYZ material, except for the XYZ summon of an Unstable monster. This card cannot be used as synchro material. Put one flux counter on this card during your end phase. This card loses 1000 ATK and DEF for every flux counter on it. When this card leaves the field or is ever in your graveyard, banish it. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Extra Deck'] Two or more Level 7 Unstable Monsters This card gains 1500 ATK for each XYZ material attatched to it. Your opponent takes no battle damage from battles involving this card the turn it's summoned. You may detatch one XYZ material from this card to gain 900 lifepoints. During your standby phase, detatch one XYZ material from this card. When this card leaves the field, banish it. Three Level 7 Unstable Monsters Once per turn, you may move one flux counter from a monster you control to this card. This card gains 1000 ATK and DEF for each flux counter on it. If this card would be destroyed, you may detatch one XYZ material from it instead and gain 800 lifepoints. When this card leaves the field, banish it.[/spoiler] [spoiler='Spells'] When you would place a flux counter on a monster you control, you can instead banish one Unstable monster from your deck to place that counter on this card. When this card is destroyed, lose 500 lifepoints for every flux counter on it. Equipped monster gains 500 attack and defense for every flux counter on it. During either player's turn, you may return this card to your hand. [/spoiler] [spoiler='Traps'] Special summon one Unstable monster from your banished zone, and place one flux counter on it. It cannot be used as material for a synchro or XYZ summon, or be tributed in any way. Target one Unstable monster you control, and return any number of other unstable monsters you control to your hand. Remove one flux counter from the target monster for every card returned to hand, and it also gains 500 ATK for each card returned to your hand.[/spoiler] Should be fairly self- explanatory archetype. The XYZ restriction is to avoid big eye and Dracosauras shenigans. They have excellent offensive pressure, but terrible defense. Enjoy, and review if you can find the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted February 8, 2015 Report Share Posted February 8, 2015 You say excellent offence on these cards, yeah? Well... I'm not sure it matters, but you have put the complete opposite. Regardless, the effects of these cards are good. But, I'm no expert at creating cards, so I'm gonna hand it over to the people who are born to make cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lumin567 Posted February 8, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2015 Thank you. The point was that they have a lot of disruptive abilities, and that gives them offense on top of their swarming. I was worried if I gave the attacks over then 2500 range they could enable a lot of Otks. should I correct this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaotic Angel Posted February 8, 2015 Report Share Posted February 8, 2015 It entirely depends on the cards' level at the end of the day, but if it was me, I'd correct it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lumin567 Posted February 10, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2015 Ok, some attack boosts in, life has been busy, not time for much else. [spoiler='Monsters with New Attack Values'] This card cannot be normal summoned or set. You can special summon this card from your hand. When you special summon this card, choose another Unstable monster you control. It is unaffected by card effects until the end phase Pay 1000 life points whenever you special summon an Unstable monster, except one summoned by this card's effect. This card cannot be used as an XYZ material, except for the XYZ summon of an Unstable monster. Put one flux counter on this card during your end phase. This card loses 1000 ATK and DEF for every flux counter on it. When this card leaves the field or is ever in your graveyard, banish it. You can special summon this card from your hand. When you special summon this card, you may tribute a monster you control to banish any card on the field, and this card gains 500 ATK if you do. Lose 1000 life points whenever you special summon an unstable monster. This card cannot be used as an XYZ material, except for the XYZ summon of an Unstable monster. This card cannot be used as synchro material. Put one flux counter on this card during your end phase. This card loses 1000 ATK and DEF for every flux counter on it. When this card leaves the field, banish it. You can special summon this card from your hand. When you special summon this card, target monster loses 1000 ATK and is changed to attack position. Lose 1000 life points whenever you special summon an unstable monster. This card cannot be used as an XYZ material, except for the XYZ summon of an Unstable monster. This card cannot be used as synchro material. Put one flux counter on this card during your end phase. This card loses 1000 ATK and DEF for every flux counter on it. When this card leaves the field, banish it. You can special summon this card from your hand. When you special summon this card, destroy one spell or trap your opponent controls. Lose 1000 life points whenever you special summon an unstable monster. This card cannot be used as an XYZ material, except for the XYZ summon of an Unstable monster. This card cannot be used as synchro material. Put one flux counter on this card during your end phase. This card loses 1000 ATK and DEF for every flux counter on it. When this card leaves the field, banish it. This card cannot be normal summoned or set. You can special summon this card from your hand.If you do, you may special summon another Unstable monster from your hand. Lose 1000 life points whenever you special summon an Unstable monster, except one summoned by this card's effect. This card cannot be used as an XYZ material, except for the XYZ summon of an Unstable monster. This card cannot be used as synchro material. Put one flux counter on this card during your end phase. This card loses 1000 ATK and DEF for every flux counter on it. When this card leaves the field or is ever in your graveyard, banish it.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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AFKassassin Posted February 20, 2015 Report Share Posted February 20, 2015 If you really want to see if your deck is OP, just upload it to Duel Portal. Everyone is very friendly and could surely help you out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lumin567 Posted February 21, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2015 Thanks! I've been quite busy for the past few days and haven't had a chance to do anything except bump my posts, but I hope to try out Duel Portal today! Oh yeah, Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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