Bullyman Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 comments? that's my first card so im not a expert Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Hello,? I cannot see them... save them in your pictures... then go to tinypic.com upload it. click the one that sais for forums and message boards. paste it here... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 WHAT CARDS? All i see is a make your own at yugiohcardmaker.net!??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bullyman Posted March 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 so better[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 sorcerers are spellcasters... do not capitalize "the" in the name... the picture is overused AND NOT CREDITED... terrible OCG.... correct ocg is: "While this card is the only monster you control, when a monster on your opponent's side of the field attacks, increase the ATK of this card by half of the origional ATK of the attacking monster until the End Phase of this turn." ^repost with this written.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyrotechnet Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 so better[/align] thats better. should it be Spellcaster not fiend?OCG isnt all that great, grammar needs some work. ii'd give it about 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Its not bad, the OCG is off a little though but hunterb put you straight on that.You also misspelt increased. Still, the image is nice, you must post a disclaimer crediting the artists though. But this is quite nice if its your first card, I hope to see more from you. =D6/10 for a newbie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 yes. i had perfect ocg... anyways... yeah just use my ocg tip and it is fine... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bullyman Posted March 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 thnx for the comments and here is my new Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 "When this card is destroyed, add 2 cards that include "S.C." in their names from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand." ^absolute sure that is correct OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bullyman Posted March 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 wrong OCG i make a new tommorow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 okay then... you know that there IS an EDIT button on the bottom of your posts, so that you can add things to them like other cards.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 No need for butter-like talking, hunter. You like peanuts, now shut-up please...What the heck this thing got to do with edit button?Also card is dumb. Really. Both of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bullyman Posted March 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 Thats my new my rating 5/10 that isn't so good:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bullyman Posted March 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 sry for double Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshua josh joshua josh Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 :D:i love your dragon its cooly man keep up the good work.josh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 The new dragon card looks beautiful 8/10 the Sorcerer card needs work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 No need for butter-like talking' date=' hunter. You like peanuts, now shut-up please...What the heck this thing got to do with edit button?Also card is dumb. Really. Both of them.[/quote'] I hate nuts... unlike you... lol. He can just put all of these cards in the FIRST POST just using the EDIT BUTTION. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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