Red-Eyes B. Over Dragon

[RYOURI2]

 

1 Tuner monster + 1 or more "Red-Eyes" non-Tuner monsters.
 

Once per turn: You can banish from your graveyard 1 "Red-Eyes" monster to target 1 card on your opponent side of the field: Banish that target. This card cannot attack during the turn you activate this effect.

 

[EndUser]

  The way things are going, everything is to expect. I assume they will make a Red-Eyes Synchro Monster, but you are a step ahead of them. ;)

 

  About the card: The cost is good for the effect you want to activate. Also, it's good that you target the card you want to banish; else the effect would be a lot stronger. However, it can banish any card on their field (even a Set one), with the drawback of no attacking with this monster directly. A potential heavy direct attack is prevented but that's not enough, especially for an effect like this. If the card you banish is a monster then it's fine. Else, make it not attack at all.

  Moreover, there are some minor OCG errors on the effect. After you change the effect (which I highly suggest), the effect below will NOT be the one to include, it's just to show a more correct way to be written. One way you could write it is: "Once per turn: You can banish 1 "Red-Eyes" monster from your graveyard to target 1 card on your opponent side of the field: Banish that target. This card cannot attack your opponent directly during the turn you activate this effect."

 

  That's about it. Off topic, I saw that you're member for years, but this is the very first post you've made. I'm impressed!

[RYOURI2]

Hey, EndUser! Thanks for the comment. ;) I changed the effect so the monster cannot attack if the effect was activated! 
BTW, yes, I created this account  just to make some cards for my fanfiction, but I never posted anything in the forum. XD I will post more of my "Red-Eyes" cards in there!