vati 66 Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 hey i made this one card and wondered if i should continue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
atlantas-hero Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 ah lets start with the name its all in ordinary u must make it capital for all not for the and of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yaden Yuki Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 ok the card is not so bad but you need to fix some things first of all the capitals in the name and the capitals in the effect second there are some small OCG errors so you fix that to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 Bad OCG and you need to capitalize. Nice pic though. I would give it an A, since your´e new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vati 66 Posted March 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 actually I'm not that new I've been on for three years and just never posted anything anyway thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted March 31, 2008 Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 It's ok, but I see some OCG and Grammar errors in there, so 6/10 =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moonwalk 2000 Posted March 31, 2008 Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 letter grade D+ to many errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vati 66 Posted March 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 hey check out elemental knights again for better grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted March 31, 2008 Report Share Posted March 31, 2008 Really needs work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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