yugiohlover Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 better name. better picture. I lowered the ATK. sry it took so long, but my computer was giving me trouble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 You also forgot to post the revised card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Chaos Pudding Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 10/10 Wouldn't change a thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohlover Posted March 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 You also forgot to post the revised card. i know, about fix that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 You also forgot to post the revised card. i know' date=' about fix that[/quote'] I can't even tell what you're attempting to say here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohlover Posted March 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 You also forgot to post the revised card. i know' date=' about fix that[/quote'] I can't even tell what you're attempting to say here. Can you see it now? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Chaos Pudding Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 You still didn't fix the wording. Do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohlover Posted March 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 You still didn't fix the wording. Do that. what's wrong with it? i don't see anything in wording to be fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Chaos Pudding Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 Well, first off, "Increase" shouldn't be capped. Look up some other cards that have similar effects, and pretty much emulate their wording. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 good effect, bad name, bad pic. 6.8/10 = decent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohlover Posted March 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moonwalk 2000 Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 9/10 cool card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DuelRuler10 Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 You misspelt increase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohlover Posted March 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 spelling error fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 The better wording is; 'While this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK of all Reptile-Type monsters on your field by 1000.' And overpowered, it gets an instant 1000 boost thus its a Lv4 2000 ATK'r Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohlover Posted March 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 how's this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 The better wording is; ' While this card remains face-up on the field' date=' increase the ATK of all Reptile-Type monsters on your field by 1000.[/b']' And overpowered, it gets an instant 1000 boost thus its a Lv4 2000 ATK'r I suggest copying whats bolded and pasting it in the card maker and Lowering its ATK to like 700. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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SOUL Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 10/10, cool card yugiohlover! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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