Faded Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 Attention: Must Read The Rules First.Rules1- There is to be NO rating given to this card! So no ?/10 or whatever.2 -Only suggestions on how to fix the grammar mistakes!3 -Dont say theres an error without first pointing it out! You may discuss ideas about the card, and suggest changes. Any breaking of the above rules will get you Neg'd! After I am satisfied with the result and changes, and everyone says its okay, then will it be added it to my card collection thread, and open to ratings there. [align=center]During your End Phase, you can activate 1 of the following effects:- Increase your Life Points by 400 for every monster on your opponent's side of the field that was destroyed this turn.-Increase the ATK of 1 monster on your side of the field by 600.-Pay 1000 Life Points, and Special Summon 1 "Red Option Token" (LIGHT/Machine/4/1000/1000) to your side of the field.disclaimer: I do not own this picture. I only use this to enhance over overall quality of my card.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 Maybe it should say "you can choose to activate" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 I changed it to just activate. Is that better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 Bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 It's definitely an interesting card. I don't see any mistakes, so I guess that's all I can say :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 Thats all I need to hear! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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