Faded Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 Attention: Must Read The Rules First.Rules1- There is to be NO rating given to this card! So no ?/10 or whatever.2 -Only suggestions on how to fix the grammar mistakes!3 -Dont say theres an error without first pointing it out! You may discuss ideas about the card, and suggest changes. Any breaking of the above rules will get you Neg'd! After I am satisfied with the result and changes, and everyone says its okay, then will it be added it to my card collection thread, and open to ratings there. [align=center]When this monster is Normal Summoned, apply the appropriate effect according to the number of "Sushi Cat" monsters on your side of the field;0: Special Summon 1 "Sushi Cat" in your hand or your Graveyard to your side of the field.2-3: Destroy all monsters on your side of the field, and Special Summon 1 "Sushi The Legend" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard.disclaimer: I do not own this picture. I only use this to enhance over overall quality of my card.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 You need to say when you can activate the effect and how often. Is it once per turn? As often as you like? When this card is Summoned? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyo_Momotaro Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 hey, i think the grammer's fine... there could be some sort of limitation though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 Yeh its kinda automatic when the effect can activate? maybe I should make it when its summoned instead... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyo_Momotaro Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 it's your card, so it's all up to u. :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 Since it doesn't say, I'm assuming it's as often as you like during your turn, in which case this card is overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 It was just that the text got small, and it could get abused with Catapult Turtle if there was 0 or 1 "Sushi Cat" on the field to begin with. So I will alter the effect. EDIT:Fixed :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 Do cards nowadays still say things like "When this card is Normal Summoned successfully", or is that an old version of the grammar? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 I know not. I just wrote it that-a-way because Im a lazy guy in a hurry... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 Hey! It's a Great Card! To bad i don't Get 2 Rate ^_^ :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 After I am satisfied with the result and changes, and everyone says its okay, then will it be added it to my card collection thread, and open to ratings there. Once its added to my Card Archive or Rocking Sets and Single Cards, then you can rate it there. If theres nothing that you think is wrong, then I dont mind a rating. Its mostly aimed at those that think theres an error but can be changed in a matter of minutes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 Bumpmade a few OCG changes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 Looks good to me, and an interesting support for the other cards :P I like it, and didn't see any mistakes ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 Thank you friend :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 I really like it too bad you can't rate! By the way were is sushi cat? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 I really like it too bad you can't rate! By the way were is sushi cat?there is the link to my sets and single cards where you will find my sushi cat monster;http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=32942 but for the convience of everyone, I have added sushi cat to the 1st thread instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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