evilanimegenious Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 heres one i just did. i think it may be over powerful but ive tried to make it more balaced - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AJM Posted April 1, 2008 Report Share Posted April 1, 2008 sorry but the OCG is horrible and the grammar is not good...i understand wut yu meen but its still way overpowered only 3 sacrifices and that power is crazy hi sorry i dont like giving bad reviews but i have to give it a 3/10 x( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilanimegenious Posted April 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2008 dont worry. ill get better (i hope X( ) thanks for looking anyway. btw, what is ocg? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Overpowered. Also, terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilanimegenious Posted April 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 all thanks too this site and artworks creator Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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zap50001 Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 not bad little overpowered but you cant have more than 3 tributes 7 outa 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Bad OCG. Some bad pics. Overpowerd. 2.515 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilanimegenious Posted April 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 thanks zap50001, supreme duelist - do you like giving out crap scores or are to stingy to be a little nicer to newbies? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Crow Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 good cards but i would change "Flash Masta" to "Flash Master". sounds better. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 6/10, im nice to newbies...Diapers? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilanimegenious Posted April 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2008 *shoots grayall for the bad joke, then rvives him* will do...how do i do that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilanimegenious Posted April 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2008 all thanks to this site and pics creators. i no there are a couple of bad pics, but they were the best i could find (late at nite and am too lazy to do an indepth search. go figure) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilanimegenious Posted April 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2008 i feel like chips and salad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilanimegenious Posted April 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2008 lol. ill stop spamming now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted April 5, 2008 Report Share Posted April 5, 2008 The pic is extremely overused. 4/10It is FULL of grammar and OCG errors. 3/10The effect is completely unorigional. 3/10It is EXTREMELY OVERPOWERED. 0/10 TOTAL = 9/40 = 2.2/10 F- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilanimegenious Posted April 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2008 which pics ovrused and whats overpowederd? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted April 5, 2008 Report Share Posted April 5, 2008 The one in the first post. I do not feel like reading or rating the rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karubin Posted April 5, 2008 Report Share Posted April 5, 2008 Notes:1) OCG errors , Spelling Error2) Picture Quality3) As I see for now, these cards are only good if the opponent has that certain card in their deck or on the field. Izuro Hashindo, Not sure why you make it so high level, I'm assuming that it is your character card, but for this high level with such a boring effect. It is just not good. 3/10 Pentacle Colaboration, too confusing, each card with 'Akuma' in its name, but in or on where? Field? Graveyard? 4/10 Exorcist Allen Walkers Shadow, you need to mention where you can summon the crown clown card. Since you don't have the two mentioned card, I can't really say much about this card, but it is not a bad card. Other than the fact that I don't like the image. 5/10 Exorcist Yu Kanda, too much spelling errors, so take time to read it over before actually post them. OCG error is fine, but spelling errors are just not acceptable. First thing with that effect, I think this card needs to bump up to level 7 since with that attack points, it can destroy most of the monsters. 2/10 cause of all those spelling errors Aryster and Eliade – Forbidden Love, nothing to say since it is just a ritual summon card, but I really think if you can take out the Dgray-man text on the picture that that will be more perfect. 5/10 Exorcist Aryster Krory, Ocg error, not really a great effect since your opponent need to have akuma card for it to be useful, but I'm pretty sure you have some other creation that make them to go to your opponent's side of the field. Personally I think for the Life Point increase, you should put like depending on the star level of the Akuma, increase the Life Point by 400 times the level of the destroyed 'Akuma' monster. 6.5/10 Akuma Lv2 – Eliades True Form, not sure about your effect, if you mean by decrease the ATK of the attacking monster or your own card, but overall, it is useless if Akuma Lv2 – Eliade is not destroyed in battle or by a exorcist., so it doesn't have a good effect. Maybe you should reconsider the effect. 4/10 Akuma Lv2 – Eliade, nothing special and it is hard to summon its true form, so it is not a good card to use. 3.5/10 Exorcist General Cross, the ocg is pretty weird, so pretty much if you battle an Akuma monster you can take control the monster even if General Cross is destroyed by the Akuma monster. I'm not sure if you meant by destroying a monster with Akuma in is name then you can take control of the monster. 5/10 Flash Masta Yorouichi, this can be very overpowered. First I don't think it is hard for it to attack your opponent's Life Point directly. I think you should limited this effect by how turns it lasts after the effect activate. 5.5/10 Overall Rating: 3.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 5, 2008 Report Share Posted April 5, 2008 supreme duelist - do you like giving out crap scores or are to stingy to be a little nicer to newbies? No' date=' Supreme Duelist, as do all realistic members, don't go easy "Newbies" because a "Great Job 10/10!" won't teach you anything. Supreme Duelist didn't fully explain your errors but at least he stated them.[/color'][Most Of] The pictures are horrendous and the others are stretched. OCG stands for Original Card Grammar which is the correct way to write an effect. As to the "Sasori" cards. They belong in the "Pop Culture" section due to the fact that they belong to the show "Naruto" In actual truth, all the cards have OCG errors. In light of that statement, if you need help with specific OCG send me a Private Message. Hope I Helped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilanimegenious Posted April 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 yep, you did, and by the be a little nicer bit i meant not quite so harsh as such a low score first time will be off putting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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