(Written) New Madolche Cards

[Woloa]

This came up when me and one of my friends were talking about a yugioh fanfic/fanmanga thing we've been planning, since I keep changing my deck them, and am obsessed with Madolches,he helped me come up with a few new ones. This is primarily for the sake of keeping track of them, however, feedback is appreciated.

[spoiler='Traps']Madolche Candytown (Continuous Trap)
All monsters except Madolche monsters can't change their battle positions

Madolche Licorice Trap (Continuous Spell)
As long as you have no monsters in your graveyard, target monster can't attack or change battle positions If you control a Madolche Licorice Mistress, when this card is activated, draw a card.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='Monsters']Madolche Licorice Mistress
Level 5, Fairy-Type, 2000Atk, 1500Def
Lore: When this card in your possession is destroyed by your opponent's card (either by battle or by card effect) and sent to your Graveyard: Shuffle this card into the Deck. Once per turn, you may discard one card from your hand and special summon 1 level 4 or lower Madolche monster from your graveyard.

Madolche Appletart Filly
Level 3, Beast/Union, 500Atk, 500Def
Lore: When this card in a monster card zone is destroyed by your opponent's card (either by battle or by card effect) and sent to your Graveyard: Shuffle this card into the Deck. Once per turn, you can either: Target 1 Madolche monster you control, equip this card to that target, OR: Unequip this card and Special Summon it in Attack Position. While equipped by this effect, the equipped monster can attack your opponents lifepoints directly.

Madolche Pieking
Rank 4, Fairy/Xyz
Lore: 2 level four Madolche monsters
Once per turn you may remove an Xyz material from this card, if you do, negate the effects of all non-Madolche effect monsters until the end of turn.[/spoiler]

[Cosmo.]

The major problem that i have with these is that Madolches are based around actual desserts, not candies, it might sound like the same thing, but they're different. So licorice and candytown don't fit that much.

And why a union monster? Madolches never had them and they don't fit well.

There are also various OCG problems but right now i don't feel like fixing and many more talented people in this forum can help you fix them.

[Woloa]

The major problem that i have with these is that Madolches are based around actual desserts, not candies, it might sound like the same thing, but they're different. So licorice and candytown don't fit that much.

And why a union monster? Madolches never had them and they don't fit well.

There are also various OCG problems but right now i don't feel like fixing and many more talented people in this forum can help you fix them.

Well, I want to help my favorite archetype branch out a little, though, not beyond the relm of sweets, at all. Besides, it already covers Maple Syrup and generic Chocolate, and those aren't desserts in and of themselves. As for the union monster, I like union monsters, however, it could easily be dropped or given a different ability.