Glorious eXcess Posted April 2, 2008 Report Share Posted April 2, 2008 Ok....I needz help for writing a sonnet. You know, like, 14 lines, ABAB rhyme pattern, etc.....I needz it in 2 hours, so a rep for the best idea here.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted April 2, 2008 Report Share Posted April 2, 2008 Just any Shakespearian Sonnet? No parameters with regard to subject? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted April 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2008 no, not shakespearian....*SP?* Just, like any random subject worthy of a sonnet With iambic pentameter.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted April 2, 2008 Report Share Posted April 2, 2008 ABABCDCDEFEFGG rhyme scheme + iambic pentameter = Shakespearean Sonnet. Once long ago, in unknown foreign landDavid raised each of his animals wellHis neighbor Jacob tilled the fields by handAnd shared all with all around as equals Cousin Ruth set beaver traps through the nightFor Daniel to transform to coats and hatsTo keep everyone warm through the long winterYet such a state was never meant to last Now Daniel salts all of Jacob's best fieldsSo as to sell his meat at highest priceNot even one of Ruth's traps now still yields;Daniel killed her over a game of dice The land now dead, none of its historyShows in its musty just-built factory Meh. Not great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted April 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2008 better than mine....DIBBED....was it made by you? If so, +5 reps and, um, what does it mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted April 2, 2008 Report Share Posted April 2, 2008 better than mine....DIBBED....was it made by you? If so' date=' +5 reps and, um, what does it mean?[/quote'] I just wrote it right now, so...yeah, it's mine. If you don't believe me, Google a random line from it and watch as nothing whatsoever comes up. And what it means is... capitalism sucks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted April 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2008 oh....ok....lol....lol.....sig'd....lol....thanks for doing my homework lol....here's like....5 reps....lol...lol...lol....why am I saying lol....lol... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Static Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 better than mine....DIBBED....was it made by you? If so' date=' +5 reps and, um, what does it mean?[/quote'] I just wrote it right now, so...yeah, it's mine. If you don't believe me, Google a random line from it and watch as nothing whatsoever comes up. And what it means is... capitalism sucks. If he didn't give you 5 for that, I would give you another. Thats well written + has a good message. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 better than mine....DIBBED....was it made by you? If so' date=' +5 reps and, um, what does it mean?[/quote'] I just wrote it right now, so...yeah, it's mine. If you don't believe me, Google a random line from it and watch as nothing whatsoever comes up. And what it means is... capitalism sucks. If he didn't give you 5 for that, I would give you another. Thats well written + has a good message. He gave me 2. Thank you. Also, the poem was partially inspired by you. I needed to think of a topic, and your views came to mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HORUS Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 better than mine....DIBBED....was it made by you? If so' date=' +5 reps and, um, what does it mean?[/quote'] I just wrote it right now, so...yeah, it's mine. If you don't believe me, Google a random line from it and watch as nothing whatsoever comes up. And what it means is... capitalism sucks. High 5. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Static Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 better than mine....DIBBED....was it made by you? If so' date=' +5 reps and, um, what does it mean?[/quote'] I just wrote it right now, so...yeah, it's mine. If you don't believe me, Google a random line from it and watch as nothing whatsoever comes up. And what it means is... capitalism sucks. If he didn't give you 5 for that, I would give you another. Thats well written + has a good message. He gave me 2. Thank you. Also, the poem was partially inspired by you. I needed to think of a topic, and your views came to mind. :) *Internet Hug* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 lol....any other topics for my poems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
b7hamma Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Salty you're so ghey... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Salty you're so ghey... Super Mario Galaxy says that it's you that is Mr. Ghey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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