Nugget Lord Posted June 28, 2015 Report Share Posted June 28, 2015 This is a continuation of my Anti-Burning Abyss Monster, http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/336455-beatrice-guide-to-the-paradiso-anti-dark-abyss/. This set works through Special Summoning monsters when you have Banished monster. Works well with Macro Cosmos, Dimensionsal Fissure, etc. [spoiler=Justinian, Sphaera of the Paradiso] ***LIGHTFairy / EffectATK: 500 / DEF: 2000EFFECT: If you have at least 1 banshed Monster, you may Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card would be destroyed, banish it instead.. If it was destroyed by battle, destroy the Monster that selected this card as an attack target. When this card is banished: you may add 1 "Paradiso" monster from your deck to your hand. [spoiler=Cacciaguida, Sphaera of the Paradiso] ***LIGHTFairy / EffectATK: 1800 / DEF: 1100EFFECT: If you have at least 1 banshed Monster, you may Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card would be destroyed, banish it instead. All face-up "Paradiso" Monsters you control gain 600 ATK during the Battle Phase. When this card is banished, Special Summon 1 banished "Paradiso" monster. [spoiler=Trajan, Sphaera of the Paradiso] ***LIGHTFairy / EffectATK: 1100 / DEF: 1400EFFECT: If you have at least 1 banshed Monster, you may Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card would be destroyed, banish it instead. You may banish 1 face-up "Paradiso" Monster you control; Draw 2 cards. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase this turn. When this card is banished, target 1 banished "Paradiso" monster and Special Summon it. [spoiler=Piccarda, Sphaera of the Paradiso] ***LIGHTFairy / EffectATK: 100 / DEF: 2400EFFECT: If you have at least 1 banshed Monster, you may Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card would be destroyed, banish it instead. Banish the top 3 cards of your deck. If you banished any Monsters, Special Summon them. They cannot be used as Tributes. When this card is banished, banish 1 card in your Graveyard. [spoiler=Damian, Sphaera of the Paradiso] ***LIGHTFairy / EffectATK: 2000 / DEF: 500EFFECT: If you have at least 1 banshed Monster, you may Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card would be destroyed, banish it instead. When this card is banished, you gain 300 Life Points for each of your banished Monsters. Constructive criticism appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tojin Posted June 29, 2015 Report Share Posted June 29, 2015 I like the idea, and the cards are reasonably well-designed, but I do have a few qualms. Namely, Piccarda and, to a lesser extent, Damian and Trajan. Piccarda's DEF is a tad high for a level 3 monster; maybe make it 2100 or 2000? Also, her effect needs an OPT clause badly, and you may want to make it so that the monsters summoned with it can't be used as Xyz Material, at least for that turn. Speaking of 2000, Damian's ATK is also a bit too high for my liking. I suggest making it 1800 or 1700. As for Trajan, drawing 2 cards feels kinda OP. I think either make it draw 1 and remove the BP restriction, or make it so Trajan can only banish himself. Overall, though, they look pretty nice, and I look forwards to any other work you may do on them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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