EliminateHRN Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Okay I haven't made a card in quite a while but here is a new one and it is the first card from my new set/booster "Elite Creatures" and more info on it will come when I get some cards done but here it is [b]Image Credit[/b] wolfberserker [IMG]http://i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii63/Shadow_Avian/untitled-27.jpg[/IMG] [b]Image Credit[/b] maggock (http://maggock.deviantart.com/art/Phoenix-Tears-3987985) [IMG]http://i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii63/Shadow_Avian/untitled-79.jpg[/IMG] There it is and again I haven't made a card in a while so I might have lost my touch on cards :D but hopefully not but please rate/comment Note: I haven't made "Elite Creature" yet but I'm working on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Overused Picture, Nice Effect, It Dosen't Look Good With Ultra Rare. 9/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Thanks I hope I can either post Elite Creatures today or tomorrow and I know it is a overused pic but it is hard to find pics these days for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Thanks I hope I can either post Elite Creatures today or tomorrow and I know it is a overused pic but it is hard to find pics these days for me Oh...I Use www.deviantart.com :) They have the best Pictures Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Yeah I know still tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Oh... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 But thanks anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 You're Welcome...:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Sorry but noone else likes it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 O, don't worry. I like it plenty. The picture is overused though. I realize pictures are hard to find but finding them when it's the hardest determines who are the best card makers. From the effect I'm guessing this set is focused on Zombies? It's not a bad support. I'd like to the see the effect of "Elite Creature" seeing that in the effect you never stated that it could only be summoned by the fusion of listed monsters. It's not bad, a good way to get back into your groove. I too have returned from a lapse of not being active but I'm doing my best to get it all back and to help new members alike. Good Job. Hope I Helped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Okay thanks and I forgot to add the Listed Monsters things I'll add that later but thanks and Elite Creatures is mostly focuses on Zombies but also other support but I've haven't been active that much cause I've been working on my TCG "Clear Lair" but thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Very nice card, despite the overused image. Org 13 pointed out the only thing that I saw wrong, so yay for that. All-around a pretty good card. overall - 13.13/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Thanks hope to get Elite Creatures up soon although I still need a bosster pack made Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Thanks hope to get Elite Creatures up soon although I still need a bosster pack madeCan't wait to see them :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Added a new card and tell me any errors on it please just don't say "OCG Errors" please point them out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Added a new card and tell me any errors on it please just don't say "OCG Errors" please point them out I don't really see any OCG Errors. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 You had me waiting all this time for the next installment!Well I think a more suitable name is "Tears of a Phoenix" and I think you should go with the "Dark Magic Curtain" effect because you're giving HALF your Life Points so it better be damned worth it. Revised:If you activate this card, you cannot Normal Summon, Flip Summon or Special Summon this turn. Pay half your Life Points to Special Summon 1 WIND monster from your hand, deck, or Graveyard to your side of the field.I Hope I Helped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Thanks and I'll change the name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Sorry for DP but updated the card (Tears of a Phoenix) but I really didn't change up the effect tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 First one: in the first sentence "except by the effect of "Elite Creature". " Second one is good. Organization_XIII: Just use Summon instead of Normal Summon, Flip Summon or Special Summon. It is easier, thanks to the new OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Okay thanks I'll change that when I make the other cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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