Красивая Ведьма Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 The Artwork's creater is unknown if you know who it is please respond so I can credit him/her.OCG corrected Thanks for the suggestion Organization_XIII Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Balanced, but still terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 What is wrong with this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Even if we ignore the butchered OCG, the effect has no originality whatsoever. BOAR ING. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Not to be mean, but if your not specific don't bother posting. So the effect isn't original well every time I post an original one they are "overpowered" so make up your mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Butchered is a great word for it. It's fine OCG comes with time but if you don't want more complaints about it try learning as fast as you can. As Crab Helmet said, "It's boring." A little underpowered actually. Maybe spice it up by changing the effect to "This card his card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. If this card (successfully) destroys 2 as a result of battle monsters during the same Battle Phase, draw 1 card."Something to get the card creative!Note: Call me a hypocrite but the ocg for the suggested effect may be off by a bit. I'm not accustomed to such effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 You do know that Hatsumomo is the traitorous Geisha from Memoirs of a Geisha? She's the one who tries her best to ruin Sayuri. I don't care for the name, to tell the truth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Yes, that is why I chose it! The name is supposed to infer to the movie and in turn impose that she is evil as well. I like the name personally. After all she uses iron fans as a weapon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Well now that I have had my fill of random "Memoirs of a Geisha" comments for today.....Another thought is to chain it to make a set out of the WIND element and such. Not spectacularly original but a start nonetheless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted April 3, 2008 Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 Not to be mean' date=' but if your not specific don't bother posting.[/quote'] What do you mean, not specific? If you're talking about the OCG, it's because all of the OCG is wrong; there isn't any specific part that's more wrong than another. So the effect isn't original well every time I post an original one they are "overpowered" so make up your mind. I've got a better idea: make original balanced cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2008 I've decided to redo the card the new card is in the old ones place at the first post. So you can all insult it further or hopefully even like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 You're updated card's OCG is still off. I'm almost sure Konami doesn't want the word "kill" in their cards because only little children read them.Example: What recently happened in Georgia with 3rd Graders.OCG FIXES:This card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. If this is the only monster on your side of the field, destroy 1 face-up monster with 2500 ATK or less.Still is a bit overpowered but nice to see you try to fix your mistakes. Hope I Helped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 It's Pretty Good But SOME Errors and i don't really like the picture. : / Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted April 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Thanks, I may change the wording to destroy later but its fine for now. I'm glad its getting an "ok" rating. My next one will be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackKnight Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 It's not bad, but it's not good either. 6.75/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted April 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 I'm so glad to see improvement in my ratings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Thanks' date=' I may change the wording to destroy later but its fine for now. [/quote'] I gave you the correct OCG or did that go unnoticed? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted April 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 Thanks' date=' I may change the wording to destroy later but its fine for now. [/quote'] I gave you the correct OCG or did that go unnoticed? I thought I gave you credit for it, but I will put your name in the first post. Thanks for the help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 I thought I gave you credit for it' date=' but I will put your name in the first post. Thanks for the help![/quote'] O, no, no no. I came out sounding like I was condescending to you. No credit is needed I just thought that you were saying that you needed the OCG. This was a whole misinterpretation. I get my reward from helping other members. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted April 4, 2008 Report Share Posted April 4, 2008 3.750 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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