Frieza (First Form)

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Frieza (First Form)

 

Once this card has destroyed one other card on the enemy side of the field. You can summon on "Frieza (Second Form) Once per turn on your standby phase this card can destroy one set down card.

[mariofreak12]

First things first I like that you watch DBZA and I get the joke. Besides that I would just like to point out some grammar. I am not the best at it my self but this might make more sense.

 

Once per turn this card can destroy one set card on the field. When you destroy a card on your opponent's side of the field using this effect you can send this card to the graveyard and Special Summon 1 Frieza (Second Form).

 

Now that that is a bit more clear I have a few questions.

How strong is Frieza (Second Form), because if it is much stronger than this card then it will be to easy to get out since on the turn you summon it you can activate it's effect and instantly get the boosted up version. Also you never state where you summon the second form from. If it has to be in your hand I would find that a bit more difficult to get out. It's a pretty good base but If the second form is anything like it is I the show, then this is to easy of a way to summon it. I mean all in one turn you can destroy a card, summon the next version use whatever his effect is (Which I suggest you post all of his forms so then we can just it better.) and attack with that form or who knows how easy you made it to summon the next form, and then you have a powerful card, at least I would thing it would be, and you did it all in a single turn. It needs just a couple tweaks.