Fat Cat Ultim Posted August 9, 2015 Report Share Posted August 9, 2015 Hey everyone, I disappeared for a year and forgot all cardmaking basics,so go easy. VERSION 1 EPHYRUS THE CASTER LVL3/DARK EFFECT MONSTER/SPELLCASTER Once per turn,you can banish 1 card from the Graveyard.If you do,draw 1 card and reveal it:if the revealed card is Spell Card,this card gains 200ATK.If not,this card is sent to the Graveyard and the controller can target any of his face up monsters on the field and banishes it,if not,the controller loses 300 LP.7 (I know it seems a bit noobish.I forgot most my cardmaking skills.Constructive criticism welcome) VERSION 2 (Thanks to : Peridank)CHANGES : Card Art ChangeEffect (Help from Peridank) and small OCG Fixes Ephyrus The Caster LV4/DARKSPELLCASTER/EFFECTATK 1200 / DEF 450 LORE : Once per turn,when this card is face-up on your side of the field,you can banish 1 card from your Graveyard.If you do:Draw 1 card and reveal it.If it is a Spell Card,this card gains 900 ATK and 600 DEF.If not,send this card to the Graveyard.Then target 1 face-up monster you control:Shuffle that target into the deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fat Cat Ultim Posted August 10, 2015 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2015 Bump for critcism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peridank Posted August 10, 2015 Report Share Posted August 10, 2015 This card... As I regret to inform you... Has MANY faults. Once per turn you get an extra 200 ATK? Starting at 700. So first turn is 900 then 1100 then 1300 so forth. This is very time consuming and will likely die before it reaches 2100. Not to mention its luck based. 300 LP means nothing in this game and is confusing to why its here. Pros:Banishes cards you may want banished from grave Concerns:Almost everything else... Sorry to be so harsh... I recommend you upgrade its stats and its effect entirely. Along the lines of 1500 atk gaining 1000 upon drawing a spell. Instead of banishing have it shuffled into the deck. This thickens the deck (which is bad) while letting you potentially draw it later. Keep the destruction effect. It works. This is just an example of what my version would do. Let yours have at it. I understand you are just getting back... But you must have left for a while. Welcome back I suppose... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fat Cat Ultim Posted August 10, 2015 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2015 I accept harsh critcism,but by my standards,this is constructive.Thank you for your feedback.I'll update the card ASAP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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