[Written] Elder of Dark World

[Monarch King]

DARK, Level 2, Fiend/Effect, ATK 600 / DEF 400

 

During either player's turn: You can target 1 "Dark World" monster with a different name in your Graveyard; discard this card to the Graveyard, and if you do, add that target to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Elder of Dark World" once per turn.

[evil cucumber]

 Eh, this only adds more interactions with their field spell, giving more banish fodder for the cost. Not really something you would like to start with. Can't think of any reason to why you made it a Quick Effect. Would it be to prevent clog from hands with 2 of these cards, I assume, so you could use during your opp turn. Dark Smog isnt good enough in Dw's to compensate for that.

 Flavor-wise, it doesnt follow the DW floating pattern nor it carries a name based on a color, and thats almost a must for their main deck monsters. I think this is far from being a realistic card for this archetype.

[Dog King]

yeah during either players turn isnt a good idea

 

also this would make the deck better but not in the way i would like to see them better. id rather the deck have more interaction with opponent as roght now its just use dragged down to get rid of opponents cards and try to draw into skill drain as fast as possible

its not a very fun deck to play against even of its not a good deck and thats what needs to be changed

[Radiant F.U.R.Y.™]

I love dark worlds. Ive made a few. I see what you're going for here (or at least what i would use it for). If only there were a card that could serve as grapha retrieval to hand OR field. Then i could pop their stuff! It's a good idea, but needs polishing. Change the name to a misspelling of a color...maybe "Yndigeau, Elder of Dark World" or something.

 

Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can target 1 "Dark World" monster in your Graveyard, except "Yndigeau, Elder of Dark World"; discard this card , and if you do, add that target to your hand.