Whit3 Sox Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 Here they are. I originally just posted the Dragon of the Sun, but I just finished these. It took about a total of 2 hours making all 6 of these. About 20 minutes per card. So please comment and rate. Thanks. =D Plus, if anybody knows how to change the name of the thread, please tell me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 Well, let me be the first to say that for your first card it is a fantastic start. The image could be a bit better but that comes in time. The effect is great, I thought you were going to throw in "trample" effect which would've ruined the card. In a pleasant turn of events, you made yourself gained the Life Points instead of the common "trample."There is only one small OCG error and that is that in the last sentence you capitalized "attack" which should not be capitalized.I'm very glad to see fresh, new, and skillful talent entering YCM. Hope I Helped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whit3 Sox Posted April 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 I appreciate the comment. Plus, the only reason that I put Attack instead of attack is because some "great" card maker told me that im supposed to capitalize Attack. Ill change it right away. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ender4449 Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 nice but i think posting my card or any other card would be spam Org. XIII corect me if im wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 its a very good card, a well done card most definatly. i would say that the only thing that i have a problem with is this little nitpicking thing, i call it nitpick because it dosent really matter if you decide to go with it or not its just something i think would be better and in this case it dosent change any of the effect atk or def. It WOULD change the name, and the type, and probably the photo. thing is if fire has anything to do with life gain, it usually has to do with phoenixes. life, fire, and phoenixes pretty much go hand in hand, though a phoeinixes effect should probably be more so on the lines of reviving itself but thats all my openion. again other then that its a great card. i would make no changes to what really matters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whit3 Sox Posted April 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 Im working on making a dragon set so I think I shall keep it as a dragon rather than a phoenix. Plus, I would post a better pic if I could find one, unfortunately its extremely hard to find a great picture. And half the time, when you find one, its blurry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 i dont grade on pictures, as i said it was an "IMO" kinda thing something that should only matter to you if you agree with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whit3 Sox Posted April 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 I hate the people that give an F on the poll without even posting. They probably put an F on it just to be mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikaeo Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 wow this card goes along with my fav style of duelinglifepoint gain and beatstick (i think its called beatstick, where you focus around monsters that have high attack) anyways 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 8/10Very good but I dislike the pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ender4449 Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 wow this card goes along with my fav style of duelinglifepoint gain and beatstick (i think its called beatstick' date=' where you focus around monsters that have high attack) anyways 9/10[/quote'] yes that would be considered a beatstickbut hey its a dragon so i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CinnamonStar Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 The picture is not really my taste, but it's still okay. I didn't find any OCG errors and the effect is nice, too.Oh and by the way, you're right by saying that it's not fair to vote an F without even telling you what they consider wrong about your card. That's cowardness, but don't worry about that.That being said, I'll give you a 8.5/10 and I also included the fact that you're a beginner (like me, by the way-___-), since I think every newby should get a chance. Not a great work, but still a B in your poll. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 nice pic, 8/10 though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whit3 Sox Posted April 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 Thanks for all the comments. I just finished the other 5 elemental dragons which i shall be posting here in a moment. Please comment and rate on these also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ender4449 Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 on ice dragon switch the normal summon and special summon effects why: easier to special than normal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whit3 Sox Posted April 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 BUMP. C'mon people.. comment some more. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victory Posted April 6, 2008 Report Share Posted April 6, 2008 not bad 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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