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Updated Red Ravager Dragnarok needs your attention.


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I think this one came out nice.

Instructions: Read the cards thoroughly if something looks overpowered. If after reading the text carefully it still looks broken, look at the card's rarity and get over it. Afterwards, proceed to rate the set with 10/10. Thank you. :P

 

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Red Ravager Dragnarok is the essential card of this set. Every other card revolves around this one. ;).

 

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I don't own any of these pics, credit is given to the artists in place of the card's edition.

A small remark regarding Red Kaiser Dragon: You'll find somewhere on this site a card with the same picture named Dark Kaiser Dragon. "Dark Kaiser Dragon" is the name that the artist, pamansazz, gave to his/her original drawing, and the card maker used that name for the card as well. I found this picture a while ago and made the card with it, named it Red Kaiser Dragon because of the set's theme, and subsequently came across the other card maker's creation. All this talk is to avoid people calling me a plagiarist. ;)

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Very nice additions. Forbidden Summoning Rites should say "...you control at least 2 face-up..." and "...you control to Special Summon...". Also, Radjinn's effect has some extra wording in it, methinks. Currently, you have it written that you remove exactly 3 Counters, so you should reword the ATK increase to something like this:

 

"...to have this card gain 1200 ATK until the End Phase." OR "...to double the original ATK of this card until the End Phase."

 

When you're removing an exact number of counters, you don't need the "for every counter removed" clause as it will always be the same number. If you wanted to leave it the way it was, you could add an "up to" before the 3 Doom Counters. Then the "number of Counters removed" would be accurate and needed.

 

Hope that wasn't too confusing :P

 

overall - 13.54/13.69 ^_^ (new cards only)

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