Flare909 Posted November 9, 2015 Report Share Posted November 9, 2015 Lore: (updated)This card can be Special Summoned by banishing 2 monsters that were summoned and were sent to your Graveyard during this turn. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing battle damage to your opponent. When your opponent sets a monster on the field; this card gains 200 ATK. When this card inflicts direct damage to your opponent; return this card into your Deck; Special Summon 1 Synchron monster from your Extra Deck whose Level is Equal to the combined Level of banished monsters that were banished by this effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted November 9, 2015 Report Share Posted November 9, 2015 Came cause of avi, stayed for review. I like the flavor and art of the card, yet the text could use some OCG fixes: This card can be Special Summoned by banishing 2 monsters that were summoned and were sent to your Graveyard during this turn. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing battle damage to your opponent. When your opponent sets a monster on the field; this card gains 200 ATK. When this card inflicts direct damage to your opponent; return this card into your Deck. However, it's very odd how the conditions to get this card are very hard and not too rewarding enough. You have to banish 2 monsters that were sent to the Grave that turn, so something like Synchro decks can only use this card to an extent. Otherwise in other decks that cannot run through their monsters that were summoned, this is pretty hard to get out, so I think just banishing 2 monsters is fine. Your opponent normally only sets 1 monster per turn, so the 200 ATK boost doesn't seem too special. And to top it off, making it return to the deck just makes it weak because this card is already a good enough beater, so what's the point of spinning it back when the summoning condition is hard in the first place? If you added a search mechanic with this card, buffed its ATK strength or effect powers, or have it do with multiple copies, I would appreciate this more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flare909 Posted November 9, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2015 Hmm great idea, I just wanted to get a review first before increasing its effects; just to check if it's going over the op line, thanks for comments. I added a twist to the card, dunno how better it is now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Flare909 Posted November 18, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2015 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flare909 Posted November 20, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2015 BUMP!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raging Zombie Dragon Fist Posted November 20, 2015 Report Share Posted November 20, 2015 It's a very weird card, too weird for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flare909 Posted November 21, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2015 Very creative for you; but hey I don't blame you for having ability to only type as far as sentence; it's ok elementary boy, you'll learn proper English later; on side note do not post comments that has no review of card that are meaningless, thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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