princess of tsurugi

[222sal]

this is cool card.i like love this card because of its fiction and design content.its a powerful card by effect.

but there is one thing,

this card is rather useless without the spell "rage of mitsurugi".

which will automatically make the card like the 3rd strongest monster in the world.The "blue eyes white dragon".

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[Guest Chaos Pudding]

I have no idea what those cards are supposed to do. Why don't you learn to type better?

[Lord Ursus]

Your OCG is a bit off. However, nice picture for the first one. They are overpowered. But you´re new, so it is okay. Maybe give them a drawback, like "By paying 2000 Life Points, take controll of 2 of your opponents monsters untill the end of the turn. You can only activate this effect once per turn, during your main phase". Or something like that. Maybe lower its ATK and DEF a bit. On the second card, give that also a drawback. I doesn´t come up with something now, but keep in mind to give powerful cards a drawback. They would be more realistic that way.

[v8561v]

Baaaaaad OCG errors,bad grammar errors,overused image

[gustavosuarez]

a lot of OCG errors. sorry. more luck for the next card

[A Flying Toaster]

nice pic, capitalization mistakes, ocg errors...and more!!

[Parting Shot]

Nice effort, but it's almost impossible to discern what the effects are supposed to be. In the future, you should ask someone to help with your OCG before posting the card. A lot of members, on the forum (including myself) would be happy to help you make your card better.

[Arekku_Koro]

Honestly not to great. But you are on the right track. BTW, if you want people to not think of you as a n00b, then type in full sentences. that's my advice. AREKKU OUT!*ZAM*

[EbonMagician]

Cool cards...they just need a little grammar doctoring, and maybe a little tweak for the sake of mechanical balance. Take it or leave it as you see fit, but how about this:

 

For Dark Dragon Princess' effect text:

 

[FIEND/EFFECT]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by this effect. You can Special Summon this card whenever your opponent controls 2 Fiend-Type monsters.

 

For Rage of Mitsurugi:

 

When you equip this card to a monster, select 1 face-up Fiend-Type monster on the field. The selected monster increases its ATK by 1500 points.

[Sailor Gourmet]

These can be transformed to excellent cards by tweaking the grammar and putting more effects or better effects in.

Try the effects that EbonMagician has offered and for the monster card, add an additional effect.

Also, for the Spell, make the effect last one turn only.

^^;

[222sal]

is it possible for me to use real cartoon characters?

i want to use cartoon characters like dragon ball z characters. can i do that?

[A Flying Toaster]

umm...of course you can.

[Parting Shot]

is it possible for me to use real cartoon characters?

i want to use cartoon characters like dragon ball z characters. can i do that?

 

Yes, you can do that. Those cards, though, would get posted in the Pop Culture section.