Careless Whisper Posted April 7, 2008 Report Share Posted April 7, 2008 This is a scene from my book, "Immortal Chronicles 8, The Silent Fight." This is the introduction to one of my Characters too. Anyway, please rate and comment. I spent a long time with this particular scene._________________________________________________________ Glaring at the 3 now helpless fighters, Razion pulled up his Crystal Bow, he narrowed his eyes on Anomu, who was still unconsious from the poison. -"No!!" Ino-Koa yelled as she tried to shield her husband. Razion smirked his grin into a sly smile and pulled back the string. Then, he released his Crystal Arrow.The arrow traveled fast with intense presition, aimed straight for Ino-Koa's back as she shielded her husband from it. A clang rang through the night sky, and Ino-Koa turned around. There, inches from her feet, lay the arrow impaled into the ground by a throwing knife. She looked astounded and confused. Who would help them? Se looked to where Abonnin was, but Anomu's brother was still unconsious from the poison as well. Then her asnwer came. Out from the ledge above them, a man in dark robes jumped out infront of them. He landed on his feet, surprisingly not making any noise at all. He looked up and revealed two glowing green eyes. Both were fixed angrily on the Crystal Leader, Razion. -"You should know better than to fight cowardly." The man spoke with a very deep, yet young voice. -"Er. Who are you?" Razion asked, a hint of fear and dispise rang with his voice.-"Let's just say, I'm the Element." The man replied slyly.-"The Element? No way...FIRE FIRE!!!" Razion ordered his remaining two archers and they pulled back their bows and fired their crystal arrows.But the man knew it was coming, as if by some inner eye or from a telepathic spy that spectated from behind the archers. He quickly jumped up, and pulled off his robe, revealing his true face. He had dark blonde and short spikey hair. He looked very young. His eyes, however, were the strangest thing Ino had ever seen, they changed colors, from Green, to a very light vivid blue. His cloak fell and stopped the progress of the arrows that he jumped over, to stop them going to Ino.But then, he disappeared, and then reappeared in the middle of the two archer-bodygaurds. Both fell simultaniously. While the man stood up revealing two very bloody knives. He looked straight at Razion.-"No, how did you do that?" Razion said fearfully, then he turned and attempted to run away. But the man appeared infront of the Razion as he turned to face where he was going, now with the man's right hand holding the top of Razion's head. The man's eyes then brightened their already bright blue glow. And Razion's rigid body froze. But his expression changed to reveal how much pain he was going under. Like one who was recieving a 10,000 volt shock directly into their nervous system starting from their brain. Razion's head suddenly exploded with gallon's of blood and a surge of lightning. The blood spieled into the air and fell like rain onto the man.-"Call me....Saze." The man said slyly and with a very dark tone to it, and he turned his eyes to Ino-Koa. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Careless Whisper Posted April 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 bump again...come on please comment on this, I spent along time making these books. Alittle appreciation would be nice... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zoloa37 Posted April 9, 2008 Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 *laughs until throat is sore.* BLOOD!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 ....could just say lol. but okay....Anyway, I'll try to get more tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zoloa37 Posted April 9, 2008 Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 put this link in your sig. more people will find it then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 Nah, it's not as important enough. I'll make a thread for the beginning of my first book in the Fan-Fic section sometime this week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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