Face McShooty Posted November 21, 2015 Report Share Posted November 21, 2015 All CnC is welcome!2 Level 4 Insect-Type MonstersOnce per turn, during either player's turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material to activate one of these effects. Each effect can only be used once while this card is on the field.•If this monster battles a monster in Defense Position that has a lower DEF than this monster's attack, inflict piercing damage. This effect lasts until the end of the Battle Phase.•When your opponent Sets a card, draw 1 card.•This monster's attack is doubled until the end of your opponent's next turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest BGMCANN0N Posted November 21, 2015 Report Share Posted November 21, 2015 While I do like the idea of an Insect exclusive xyz, there is one thing I can tell you about type exclusive XYZ's: they better have a considerable incentive to compete with other existing XYZ cards especially when they require 3 XYZ material. Now I will evaluate whether you fulfilled this guys best interest. Pro's:Okay so this guy can activate his effects on either players. That kind of versatality and range makes him tough.Multiple effect options to choose from is always a nice thingThe draw if set a card effect is kind of nice, I'd probably be using this more often than the other 2 to make up for loss card advantage I would get from Summoning him.The doubling atk effect gives him some kind of protection, better than nothing right?...Con's:Piercing on either player's turn...? That is kind of awkward, but I assume the option is nice on one's own turn.Insects don't have a good rank 4 xyz engine currently: Beetron and Spyder Spider are the only guys I can think of that can get somewhat close to making this guy. Either them or resorting to some Pendulum Insect deck.But, I can only use each effect only once while he is around.... ;_; I want to draw, draw, and draw... :(It doesn't have the most viable means of self-protection (like not being targetted or destroyed or has some negation effect) which is a problem for him since he is hard to get out.I say the best way you could help this guy and still keep his exclusive state is to just make him require 1 less insect XYZ material. Other than that, good job on your 1st XYZ. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted November 21, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2015 Thank you, so your saying leave the effect choices, change the draw one to "each time a card is set, draw 1 card"? And the one about piercing damage is supposed to be for the controllers turn, and how about if I add to the beginning "If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate cards or effects until the end of the Damage Step" and change it to just 2 materials instead of 3? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest BGMCANN0N Posted November 21, 2015 Report Share Posted November 21, 2015 Leave effect choices, but just lower XYZ material requirement to 2 Level 4 Insects. As for the other thing that I mentioned, they won't be a problem if you do lower the XYZ material requirement. The option to use 2 of those effects on either players turn makes him distinguishable enough I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Face McShooty Posted November 21, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2015 I made the suggested fix and changed it to just 2 materials Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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