completelyrandom Posted April 8, 2008 Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 Okay so I'm new, now I'm not shy and I'm quite bold anyone wants to put these cards down go ahead, but bet any money I'll be back with better cards the next day. I want your oppinions, because lets face it with my ambition I need to be told about how good they are.Ok quick Disclaimer, I do not own the art to these cards, I never have and probably never will. Current Total 16/60 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackmetal Posted April 8, 2008 Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 Good cards for youre first 8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
completelyrandom Posted April 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 Why thank you:), I'm already contemplating my next few cardfs including something special for you zombie lovers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
v8561v Posted April 8, 2008 Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 OK,but some questionsIn the first card,the monster cannot be affected when Tornado Wall is on the field.But,you can oly use tornado wall if umi is on the field,so,its better if you make just ''if''Umi is on the field''.And the ''Sea King:Monstruous Coalcanth''don't look like ''I'm a bar guy and I will finish u off!!!''.......it's just a comment,don't get angry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted April 8, 2008 Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 Here are some casual capitalization mistakes that you have made. - Summoned- Special Summoned- Life Points- Direct Damage- Trap Cards______ Just, "destroy the attacking monster" not what you had. cause you are new, I give you a 7.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted April 8, 2008 Report Share Posted April 8, 2008 Hmm... Nice to see a not-so n00bish member. Nice cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
completelyrandom Posted April 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 Thank you for all the comments, any spelling/casual mistakes I will change straight away. 7 new cards released. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted April 9, 2008 Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 I haven't read them all, however I do like them. The OCG could be better and Peaceful Passing is exactly the same as Sakuretsu Armour. Also, Monstruous Coalcanth's effect seems useless to me. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
completelyrandom Posted April 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 Thanks anyway I have actually changed the two effects mentioned and I'm going to make another few cards that fit in with Coalcanths ability, so no "That makes no sense" or anything just yet....Noobiest question I'll ever and I mean ever ask what is the OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted April 9, 2008 Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 Official Card Grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
completelyrandom Posted April 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 Ahhh thanks, I know that My card grammer isn't great and I'm trying to combat it with every new card.... If anyone has any thing else they want to say go ahead and post it I'm thinking about making a fairy type to go quite nicely with the effects of the Caolcanth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
completelyrandom Posted April 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2008 New cards added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted April 15, 2008 Report Share Posted April 15, 2008 1. Moderate OCG problems2. Some dumb names3. Uncropped pictures4. Some are overpowered.5. Some are Underpowered. 5/10 + 1/10(You are noob) + 0/10(Personal Intrest) = 6/10 World Of Warcraft elven name style rules all... Also, dont ever try to make 60. Better make 1 good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
completelyrandom Posted April 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2008 Thats just maddeningly unhelpfull, if you critisize its general practice to point out where to improve rather than just state a list of facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted April 15, 2008 Report Share Posted April 15, 2008 Facts are best damn thing on the world.Also, i dont want to correct so many card. Listen to my first post's Last sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
completelyrandom Posted April 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2008 That they may be, but that wasn't my question if you have time to go through them and criticise then you obviously have time enough to see problems and tell me solutions, If someone points something out I can change it, if some one simply posts that there are problems how the heck am I meant to get better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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