Gol'Nur The Nightmare Surgeon (An "Alien" Xyz Boss card)

[Darkteutonic]

Good day all,

 

Edit: This card is meant as a Utility/Boss card for the old archetype Alien Deck.

Here is my second creation, a its called; Gol'Nur The Nightmare Surgeon. This card was Inspired by DNA Surgery and Cosmic Fortress Gol'Gar and Number C6: Chronomaly Chaos Atlandis. It has a decent ATK and low DEF, with interesting effect such as possibly equip 1 monster on either side of the field and the ability to change the Monster Type of 1 monster. As always I am interested in your critic (Please don't be too harsh :) ) and I am open to any suggestion. So without further a do, feast your eyes on;

[spoiler=Gol'Nur The Nightmare Surgeon]

 

 

[spoiler=The card's effects]3 Level 6 monsters

During your main phase, you can remove 1 A-Counter from this card; attach 1 "Alien" monster you control to this card as an Xyz Material. If this face-up card on the field would be destroyed, you can detach all of its Xyz Materials instead. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to activate 1 of these effects.

● Target any number of spell or trap card on the field, up to the number of A-Counter on the field; return those target(s) to their owners' hands, and distribute new A-Counters among monsters on the field equal to the number of cards returned.

● Target 1 other face-up Attack Position monster on the field with an A-Counter(s), equip that target to this card.

● Target 1 monster equipped to this card by this card's effect, then, declare 1 Monster Type; Special Summon that target to your side of the field, but its effects are negated, also, it is treated as an "Alien" monster of the declared Monster Type.

 

 

[spoiler=The card's image link]http://i.imgur.com/j1QZNHr.jpg

 

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Re: Edit

After the suggestion of JustYui, I've decided to change the name of the Card to Cosmic Nightmare Surgeon Gol'Nur.

 

[spoiler=Cosmic Nightmare Surgeon Gol'Nur]

 

[Yui]

M'kay, as a former Alien player, lots to say on this one.

The first thing that stands out is how hard this would be to actually summon in Aliens.  Unless I've forgotten something, the only Level 6s in Aliens are Mother and Overlord, the former typically needing to be Tribute Summoned and the latter having that clause that you can only control one at a time.  I'd suggest making it a Rank 4 instead, since there's plenty of Level 4 Aliens, and Dog can help speed things up a bit to summon this and dish out some A-Counters in the process.

Next thing is that this card does way too much.  Backrow removal, non-destruction removal, and monster summoning all in one basket?  Add to the fact that it can sustain itself by giving itself A-Counters from its backrow effect then attaching Aliens...very fishy.  What I'd suggest is figuring out what Aliens really need right now; Gol'Gar has backrow taken care of.

The next point is more of a minor one, but a more legit-sounding name might be "Nightmare Surgeon Gol'Nur", or even "Cosmic Surgeon Gol'Nur" since both Gangi'El and Gol'Gar are "Cosmic (noun) (name)".

Other than all of the above, good Alien support.  Just needs some fixing up.

[Darkteutonic]

Thanks I appreciate the feed back, I must say I wasn't sure about the name to be honest. The most important effect for me was that it could change the Monster Type of a monster. Obviously summoning a Rank 6 with an Alien Deck requires a bit of strategy. What I would suggest is With[spoiler=King of the Feral Imps]http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/King_of_the_Feral_Imps

Which is an "absolute most" IMHO not only does it enable you to search your deck and add 1 reptile-type monster from your deck, you can then use a card like Rank-Up-Magic Astral Force to Xyz Summon this card card using King of the Feral Imps.

Aside from that, just Synchro Summon 1 level 6 monster and then use it with Alien Mother and Alien Overlord to Xyz all three of them. There are ways to do this. Its not that hard to summon.