Faded Posted April 9, 2008 Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 You can rateBUTif you see anything wrong or have any queries then please let me know. OXIII's OCG changes; This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, This monster can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 Warrior-Type monsters in your Graveyard from play. As long as this monster remains face-up on the field, any Battle Damage you take is reduced to 0. Each time your opponent declares an attack, you must remove 1 monster in your Graveyard from play or destroy this card.I do not own the artwork used for my cards. I only use them as a means of increasing the overall quality and effect of my work. I do not claim ownership of them. Browarods OCG changes; This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 Warrior-Type monsters in your Graveyard. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, any Battle Damage you take is reduced to 0. Each time your opponent declares an attack, you must remove from play 1 monster in your Graveyard. If you do not, destroy this card.I do not own the artwork used for my cards. I only use them as a means of increasing the overall quality and effect of my work. I do not claim ownership of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted April 9, 2008 Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 Wow. A beautiful Picture. Nice OCG, and a good effect. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 The picture is more life like than a typical YGO so thank you for not pointing that out lulz oh and thank you again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 Bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 Good one. The pic does not look Yugioh-Like though... 8.47/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 wow. a excelent picture. very beatiful. nice job. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 no pic credit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 almost perfect....... trouble is............ you can only use it a WATER deck... 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 almost perfect....... trouble is............ you can only use it a WATER deck... 9/10 why? cuz it's ATTR is water? your so wrong nice card. pic is too realistic, though 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 because it needs to remove water monsters to be summon....... the best way is to have all water monsters.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 lol! not WATER monsters. Warrior-Type monsters! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 because it needs to remove water monsters to be summon....... the best way is to have all water monsters.... You must've clearly misread. It says Warrior-Type not WATER. Correct: OCGI believe that there is a slight OCG error maybe none at all:This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set' date=' This monster can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 Warrior-Type monsters in your Graveyard from play. As long as this monster remains face-up on the field, any Battle Damage you take is reduced to 0. Each time your opponent declares an attack, you must remove 1 monster in your Graveyard from play or destroy this card.[/color'] Hope I Helped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuuki Ortez Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 It's a nice card, very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 oh i see....... my bad... then its a 10/10.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 Does others agree with OXIII's suggestion of proper OCG? If so, then I will change the cards effect, and thank you for all of your guys and gals comments etc :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 no pic credit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 Sorry I do not know the artist so the disclaimer as I believe is suitable enough according to the rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 i dont know about thatbut its still a nice card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted April 21, 2008 Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 Indeed the disclaimer is fine, also this thread was created before the new rules were made thus its a fine thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2008 Thank you DJ, and if there are new rules, then I havent seen them yet so I will have a look at them now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted April 22, 2008 Report Share Posted April 22, 2008 nice card fade: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 Thank you Atomix. Once Im sure I know which is the correct OCG then I can induct my monster into my Archives, so speak up everyone! Tell me which you think is written correctly. Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 Warrior-Type monsters in your Graveyard. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, any Battle Damage you take is reduced to 0. Each time your opponent declares an attack, you must remove from play 1 monster in your Graveyard. If you do not, destroy this card." I believe that fixes all the OCG mistakes. In a monster's effect, you always say "this card" not "this monster". It is an interesting card, though the image, while good, is a little too realistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted April 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 Thank you browarod for that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 23, 2008 Report Share Posted April 23, 2008 Well you could say "this card (not monster card) remains ..........."Hope I Helped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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