avariademon Posted April 9, 2008 Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 well here is my next card another sea serpent that wants to be allone but this one punishes people for haveing monsters, it might be overpowered so if you think it is please tell me how to make it more ballenced, if its only a little over powered i can live with that i am trying to push the envelope at least a little bit i think decreasing his attack might make him a bit more ballenced but i duknow... i want him to be at least 2500 edit: in addition the card says must tribute a monster, but i dont know how to make it imply that tributing a monster is opptional. must dosent sound right to me, remember i got help on its wording any how. this image dose not belong to me, i found it here (somewhere): http://www.art.com/asp/display-asp/_/ID--2208/PG--3/posters.htm?TNID=1&ui=E622D9C6CF4C4E13890E9A56262691FE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
completelyrandom Posted April 9, 2008 Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 Hmmm If you reduce the amount of Life Points taken I see no reason why this should be classed as over powerfull, hell i'd like to add it to my Army Of The Sea Booster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted April 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2008 how much life points should it be instead of 500, thing is if its the only monster on my side of the feild that means im either forced to pay 500 to keep him there or let him go, if its less it will be less of a pain for me, my prediction with this card is more people will chose to sak a monster unless the monster is really good, i honestly doubt people would go just deserts every turn. in addition it is part of the set im working on, as the title says its a sea serpent set thus it is not the only one i created Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted April 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 <,< badunkabump >.> i would just like to make sure this card is decent i dont want to leave it at one persons openion, not that his openion is not credable just i would like a few more ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 very desbalanced card. try again with another idea. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted April 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 desbalanced? do you mean, overpowered? if so why, part of the reason im posting these cards is to get an idea of how to fix them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victory Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 thats a very overused picture ive used it 7 times lol;ok card needs work 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted April 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 sorry, never seen it used before, but thats still not the point. how would you suggest i fix it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victory Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 Raise it slevel to seven then work on the OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avariademon Posted April 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 well im pretty sure that the OCG is ok because i ran it past the writen card forum and unless you can point any specific OCG errors im sure its fine, as for the lvl 7 idea? thats a great idea i think i will do that thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted April 14, 2008 Report Share Posted April 14, 2008 I don't think it's too overpowered. Sure, Aitsu exists, but then, so does Dark Armed Dragon. 8/10 mercifully. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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