Hakima Posted January 16, 2016 Report Share Posted January 16, 2016 Flavor TextThe High Seas can be a place of wonderment and adventure, but just as often, they can be a cruel and unforgiving mistress. Only the bravest of souls will ever choose to try and endure her harsh and temperamental treatment, sailors and pirates, but only a few of them - the Legendary Pirates - will ever make it to the goals they set out to accomplish. The rest of the hopeless souls - the Unworthy Pirates - will meet their end when the tide rises. What about you? Will you ascend to the top and take your place among legendary names like Davy Jones, or capsize along with the masses? Monsters[spoiler=]Unworthy Pirate - Cowardly QuartermasterWATER/Warrior/LV 2Normal/Effect800/400During either player’s Damage Step, when an “Unworthy Pirate” or “Legendary Pirate” monster you control battles an opponent’s monster: you can discard this card; that monster gains ATK equal to the combined ATK of all tokens you currently control. Once per turn: you can target 1 “Unworthy Pirate Token” on the field; destroy it, and then special summon this card from the graveyard to the field in face-up attack position.Unworthy Pirate - Lazy Cabin BoyWATER/Warrior/LV 3Normal/Effect1200/800You can special summon this card from your hand by tributing 1 “Unworthy Pirate Token”; while you control a token, this card cannot be targeted for an attack. Once per turn: you can Tribute 2 “Unworthy Pirate Token”, and then target this card and one other “Unworthy Pirate Token”; select a level between 1-6, and change their level to match that. You cannot Xyz summon the turn you use this effect, except for “Legendary Pirate” monsters.Unworthy Pirate - Bloodthirsty Buccaneer WATER/Warrior/LV 4Normal/Effect1600/1200When this card is Normal Summoned: Special Summon 2 “Unworthy Pirate Token” (Warrior-Type/WATER/Level 4/ATK 800/DEF 0) in face-up attack position; while you control a token, this card cannot be targeted for an attack. Once per turn: you can Tribute 1 Token; add 1 “Pirate” card from your deck to your hand.Unworthy Pirate - Unprepared DeckhandWATER/Warrior/LV 4Normal/Effect2000/1600When this card is Normal Summoned: target an “Unworthy Pirate” monster in your graveyard with attack less than or equal to this card’s defense; special summon it, but its effect is negated. Once per turn: you can tribute a token on your side of the field; shuffle 1 Water-type monster from your graveyard into your deck, and give this card 200 atk. This card cannot attack your opponent directly.Unworthy Pirate - Forgotten MutineerWATER/Warrior/LV 5Normal/Effect2400/2000This card can be Special Summoned from your hand by tributing all “Unworthy Pirate Tokens” you control. When it is summoned: target 1 “Unworthy Pirate” you control; destroy it, and if you do, Special Summon a “Bloody Sailor Token ” (Warrior-Type/WATER/Level 5/ATK 1800/DEF 0). While you control a token, this card cannot be targeted for an attack. Once per turn, during either player’s turn: you can Xyz summon a “Legendary Pirate” monster from your extra deck, using this card and a “Bloody Sailor Token” as the required material. Spells[spoiler=] Cove of LegendsField CardWhile this card is face-up on the field: once per turn, you may use an “Unworthy Pirate Token” as material for an Xyz Summon, but only for the Summon of a “Legendary Pirate” monster. Each time a “Legendary Pirate” monster is Xyz Summoned: place 1 “Legendary Treasure Counter” on this card. When you have 5 “Legendary Treasure” tokens on this card, you may target two face-up “Legendary Pirate” monsters you control, and then banish all other cards that you control; raise their rank to 10, and then immediately Xyz Summon a “Legendary Pirate Captain”. If this card would be destroyed, you can remove 1 “Legendary Treasure Counter” instead.Pirate Stash - Death’s DaughterContinuous SpellEach time an "Unworthy Pirate" or "Legendary Pirate" is summoned, place 2 Cannonball Counter on this card upon resolution. Pirate Monsters on the field gain 100 attack for each Cannonball Counter on this card. You may also use this effect once per turn:• Tribute 2 “Unworthy Pirate Token” that you control: target 1 face-up card on your opponent’s side of the field and place it on the top of their deck Extra[spoiler=]2 Rank 10 "Legendary Pirate" MonstersOnce per turn: you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card; special summon 1 "Mythical Kraken Token" (Sea Serpent-Type/WATER/Level 10/ATK 3000/DEF 3000). While a "Mythical Kraken Token" is on the field, this card cannot be targeted by spells, traps, card effects or attacks. 2 Level 4 "Unworthy Pirate" MonstersWhen this card is summoned: until the end of the next turn, Pirate-monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle or card effect. Once per turn, during either players turn: you can detach 1 XYZ material from this card; this turn, face up "Pirate" monsters you control cannot be destroyed by battle. InformationI wasn't going to post this until I had an entire deck written out, but I hit a block on where to go. Since I'm kind of new at this whole card creating thing, do any of you have some advice on how I could change what I have to be more balanced, or cards I could create that would add more synergy to the deck? Legendary Pirates = the boss monsters Unworthy Pirates = a bit of an engine, a bit of utility Pirate's Stash = Set of spells I plan to flesh out more It will probably become obvious pretty fast that I have a thing for pirates. xD CREDITDavy Jones by TsaoShin All credit for Death's Daughter goes to Hearthstone. I've searched for the creators of the other two images, but I can't seem to find them. I just know that I didn't make them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hakima Posted January 19, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2016 Bump. Edited the deck a lot and added a bigger line-up of monsters. Was trying to do something unique with them, but it's either OP or UP. CnC wanted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Htamret Posted January 31, 2016 Report Share Posted January 31, 2016 Looks awesome, can't wait to see what else you have in store! I'm not the best person for OCG fixes, but from what I can tell you don't have any errors aside from the caps on Francis Drake's first line. I actually came here from your intro post, so I'm also going to welcome you to the community! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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