Careless Whisper Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 Alright, I have decided to start up a new set, called Corruption of Pardise. I'll post the cards when they are finished into this thread. (I'll try posting 2 at a time after this.) Pleas rate and comment, if I have any OCG errors, please point them out. And I will fix them. Disclaimer: I do not claim ownership the images used in my cards. I swear under Oath that I will never claim ownership of any images I use in the cards that will occupy this thread in the future. [align=center]Here's the Headline card.When this card is Summoned (including Normal Summoned and Special Summoned) all face-up monster cards on your side of the field and Graveyard are treated as DARK monsters. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, while this card is face-up on your side of the field, you may discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon 1 monster card with "Corruption" in the name from your hand. You cannot Normal Summon on the turn this card's effect is activated. If you have already Normal Summoned during this turn, you cannot activate this card's effect.[/align] [align=center]When this card is Special Summoned, select 1 DARK monster from your hand and place it in your Spell/Trap Card Zone and equip it to this card. Increase this card's ATK and DEF by half of the selected monster's ATK. This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly. When this card is sent from the field ot the Graveyard as a result of battle, increase your Life Points by half of this card's ATK. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand by sending 3 DARK monsters from the field to the Graveyard. As long as this card is face-up on your side of the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all DARK monsters on your side of the field, except this card, by 500. This card's ATK and DEF become the number of cards in your Graveyard x200.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 minor ocg error with massive repercussions; u have to specify from where the monster is Special Summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 awesome card.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 My bad...hold on I'll fix that... EDIT: Fixed. Thank you for pointing that BTW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 no prob, bro. no... this card could be very useful in the current meta. *thumbs up* 7.9/10 only cuz u used Sepiroth! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 lol, thanks. I was wondering if I should make any fusions for this set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 Ya, very nice. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 fusions are well done at this point. heck, KONAMI has burnt the concept to a crisp. unless you got a new angle or some unique twist to fusion, i would say no. but, if they all have wicked effects like this one, what the hell... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 lol, I'l probably end up making some fusions. But that won't be for a long time, I'll first get all the Effect Monsters set up, then I'll do some vanillas (as crab says[means normal monster]) because you can't have a good set without some Normal Monsters. Then I'll worry about the Spell Cards, and then the Traps, and then the Fusion Monsters and Ritual Monsters(maybe Ritual Monsters, I haven't done one in a long time,) Anyway, I might end up making a structure deck based on this set. And I'll need a banner for it, I want to make this Set look Professional. If anyone is capable of making good Banners for this set, please do so, I'll be more than please, you can call the price. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meme112233445566 Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA i cant see it but i bet its graphic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 You must have a security program that prevents you from seeing images. And no it's not very graphic. I don't post cards that have images with blood in them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meme112233445566 Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 ok cuz I can usualy see pics on this website. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 lol! Crab Helmut's kinda weird. He just dips in now and then, drops a one-liner, then he disappears. I get the feeling he doesn't like Normals. I think that goes for a lot of people around here. And i totally agree with you; Normals can't just be ignored. When I first came to this site, the first card I made relied on Normal Monsters. I was bombarded with nasty comments and ridiculously low ratings for a perfectly balanced, all-around good card. lol! Put as much Normals in there as u want! I'll root for ya! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 I'll probably end up putting like 3-4 normals in there. Here's what I'll do actually. I'll post each type of card so that they are seperated from the other card types. Then, Having the right ammount, like say 30 monsters, 20 spell, and 20 magic. I'll then ask people to make a deck out of them. Give each person a challenge. Yeah, that's what I'll do....That will be interesting, and something new that I haven't seen anyone in YCM do before. Yes, yes....They'll all have their minds tangled up setting up a deck out of the cards that I make. And then...I'll have Crab Helmut and other Moderators rate how each deck it built. Yes, I'll have 10 people participate, and then I'll select some reliable members of YCM to judge each deck. And the winner will recieve 4 reps, second will get 2 reps. and third will have 100 points. But I cannot have the contest in this thread, no, I must make a thread in the Card Contest section. Once I'm done with the entire Set, I'll make a Contest and put a link to this very thread as reference in the Contest Thread. Also the winner's deck of the Deck Contest will replace my Fan-Fic/Roleplay Character's Modified Rise of the Dragon Lords deck. yes, how's that for a good plan? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 interesting. how long do you think it'll take to make all those cars? I mean, its 70 cards! 70! You've just set the bar real high for yourself there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 it'll probably take me about 4 weeks to complete but i can manage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 You must have a real good muse then! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 Possibly...Either that, or I have alot more time now that I'm single...And It's still Spring Break for me, so I have even more time... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lliencardsfromabove Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 Well...I made about 40 cards over the last six days... It's not impossible. (but I spent like 4 hours a day on the computer...:() Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 a person can make 1 card an hour and have that card be pretty good. or they can just make a whole set of crappy ones in the same amount of time. see where im going here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 I don't know. I made that card in like....10 minutes...Just imagine what I can do in one hour. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schyshter Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 i know. i just made 2 of my best cards yet this past 30 minutes. and what i said wasn't directed at you, bro. dig your sig, by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 lol thank you...But let's stay on the topic at hand....RATE MY DANG CARD ALREADY!!!(not you schyshter you already did...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 Please post a credit to where you got the image from. As for the card, it is pretty good. The pic looks a little squished to me, and the effect might sound better if worded more like this: "When this card is Summoned, all face-up monsters on your side of the field and in your Graveyard are treated as DARK monsters. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you may discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon 1 monster with "Corruption" in it's card name from your hand to your side of the field. You cannot Normal Summon on the turn this card's effect is activated. If you have Normal Summoned during this turn, you cannot activate this card's effect." That sounds better to me, and is a little shorter. Otherwise, pretty good card. overall - 13.13/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted April 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 Thanks Browarod...(that's hard to spell) I'll change it to that right now... EDIT: Fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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