Ultimate Ryan Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 i am entering the card in a contest and it must be perfect tell me if it is over powered or if it has a grammar mistake or wat eva iz rong wit it in u perespective! Thankz! Edit: now he cannot be special summoned yet i have not written on card yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted April 10, 2008 Report Share Posted April 10, 2008 You don't "deal" damage, you "inflict" damage, "opponent" does not need to be capitalized. Maybe a little overpowered, nice effort tho, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander² Posted April 11, 2008 Report Share Posted April 11, 2008 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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