Brooke Cussans (WRITTEN)

[Jrvasquez221]

Anatomycal Possesion

(Ritual Spell Card)

Select 1 "Brooke Cussans" from your Deck or hand; tribute monsters from your hand and/or either player's side of the field whose total combined levels equals 5, then Ritual Summon that monster to your side of the field. If you tributed a monster(s) from your opponent's side of the field, you take 2000 damage. During your Main Phase, you may shuffle 1 face-up card you control and 1 monster in/your graveyard into your Deck; return this card from your graveyard to your hand. You can only use this effect once per turn.

 

Brooke Cussans

(Fiend-type/ Ritual / Effect)

Lv.5 Atk: 100 Def: 100

DARK

 

This card can be Ritual Summoned with the ritual spell card "Anatomycal Possesion". During the turn this card was Ritual Summoned, it is uneffected by your opponent's card effects. Cannot be destroyed by battle or be targeted by card effects. Any monster which battles this card is shuffled into the Deck after damage calculation. During each End Phase, you must shuffle 1 face-up monster on the field into the Deck.

 

 

 

So yeah , basicly if there is no other monster on the field, this card will simply shuffle itself into the deck which was made to balance itself from its powerfull effect. And the ritual spell card can basicly recycle the monster if it is sent to the graveyard or destroyed, where you can easily re-summon it.

 

And yeah, this is a Possesed doll.

[Guest BGMCANN0N]

Judging from it already being immune to a lot of things including battle... Your opponent would probably begin to play passively and not invest much in the field until they have away to handle it (or let it shuffle itself out). Not to mention in order to maintain its presence on the field you have to have at least 2 monsters out that you know for sure that aren't going to die and cause this thing to be a lost cause. At the very least though: the Ritual Spell is powerful in that it eats up your opponents resources instead, and it gives you more of a reason to run Pre-Prepration of Rites at 3 just to abuse its effect.

 

But, in the end... I would want the Ritual Monster to have more merits than the Ritual Spell itself. I think you probably should redistribute the balance of the effects between the Ritual Monster and Ritual Spell so the Ritual Monster isn't just a temporary wall that kills itself.

[Jrvasquez221]

Thanks for your suggestion. Although what I originally thought was summoning this monster. Then it will shuffle itself back into the deck, then I will simply return the ritual spell card to my hand and ritual summon it again from the deck. But yeah, I see your point. So how about if I add a more "deathly" effect to the monster such as...

 

Each time your opponent Normal or Special Summons a monster(s) (from their hand), you can inflict to your opponent's life points half of the summoned monster(s) ATK on the field.

 

and I will take away the effect of any monster which battles it is shuffled into the deck, and maybe instead of shuffling 1 monster during each end phase, I must shuffle 1 monster during my End Phase only.

[Guest BGMCANN0N]

I think the Ritual Monster would be a little more manageable if you do it that way, The problem I see with that is that if your opponent has monsters to Set that have good/decent DEF they could attempt to offset your offensive momentum, and have more reasons to avoid taking damage from its effect until they: A) Have a counter to kill it. B) Actually wait on you to have it shuffle itself via negating a summon or waiting for you to get unlucky.

 

But, with all that in mind. This could be a real good stall card while you are building up a win condition (Final Countdown, Wave-Motion Cannon, etc). It could make your opponent take riskier plays that could get its burn effect kicking once you present that you have that win condition, and if they can't counter this guy or your win condition for some reason you pretty much have the game in the bag.

 

So overall, the idea works somewhat, but you have to have the external pressure to back it.