dont come in

[yugiohdragons]

boo dont come in here now GET OUT

[KingMorgortho]

Interesting, yes. Nice Artwork but the card effects are a bit strange.

[yugiohdragons]

thanks very much and have a nice deathfull day XD smily smily

[lliencardsfromabove]

So... Good. You posted something other than that other card.... And these don't seem to be so much overpowered. Wait. I contradicted myself. "Dragon of Fire" and "Dark Ninja" (I don't want to type "Alca" so much...) are pretty overpowered. You should probably decrease the ATK/DEF of "Dragon of Fire" to 0, and change the effect so that it's ATK is equal to the number of Fire-Types on the field x 500. "Dark Ninja" is quite powerful, too. Essentially, you can deal a game-winning 6000 points of damage with her (or him, or even it) although it's not likely. A little less burn.

 

While the effects are getting better, you need to work on OCG and grammar, as well as spelling. If you're not sure how to spell a word, check on dictionary.com. Read a few notable cards around here and study OCG. But much improved, overall.

[oldy 2.0]

Your grammar is REALLY bad! Go 2 school quickly. Also, look in a dictionary. AGGGGGGGHHHH!!!!

;p

P.S. 1/10

I can read, but i rated u anyway constructive criticizsm

[yugiohdragons]

oldy i said DONT RATE MAN CANT U READ

 

So... Good. You posted something other than that other card.... And these don't seem to be so much overpowered. Wait. I contradicted myself. "Dragon of Fire" and "Dark Ninja" (I don't want to type "Alca" so much...) are pretty overpowered. You should probably decrease the ATK/DEF of "Dragon of Fire" to 0' date=' and change the effect so that it's ATK is equal to the number of Fire-Types on the field x 500. "Dark Ninja" is quite powerful, too. Essentially, you can deal a game-winning 6000 points of damage with her (or him, or even it) although it's not likely. A little less burn.

 

While the effects are getting better, you need to work on OCG and grammar, as well as spelling. If you're not sure how to spell a word, check on dictionary.com. Read a few notable cards around here and study OCG. But much improved, overall.

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tyvm for the comment

[RiffMaster Alex]

Please do not double post. As for the cards, they have an interesting concept to them but are lacking OCG (Official Card Grammar)

[yugiohdragons]

alca dragon is atk 0 def 2500

[yugiohdragons]

bump

[Parting Shot]

You should only bump your thread if it hasn't received any new posts in 12 or more hours. Please remember that in the future ^_^

[jovica95]

cards are good but grap

[Grayall]

Wheres DJ?

This is crap. I dont even want to rate it.

[Atomix]

your gramma = fail

also some of your pics have the logo in the middle and some are too real

[gustavosuarez]

a lot of grammar errors. but soo god for be your first cards

[yugiohdragons]

bump

[yugiohdragons]

how do people put on signatures

[yugiohdragons]

bump

[yugiohdragons]

bump

[Bri]

NICE ARTWORK

[Organics]

My gosh, don't quadruple post.

 

Your Flip effect monster should be:

 

FLIP: Your opponent discards 1 card from his/her hand.

 

and please please PLEASE use the spell check when your making your cards, it IS there for a reason.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

The Dark Ninja is overpowered. I have a similar card, but it has a much heavier cost.

The Light Ninja is also overpowered. Three cards is too many. Both players should have to discard two or three if you want to keep its effect.

Sword of the Gods is Axe of Despair. Kill it; it's been done. By Konami, no less. And at least spell 'increase' right.

Warrior of the Darkness has an incredibly overused pic, and the OCG is terrible. See the above post.

Darkness of Wings has ever worse OCG than Warrior of the Darkness. It should be continuous; otherwise, it's sent to the Graveyard as soon as it's activated.

The Darkness is very overpowered, and the OCG is awful.

 

Since you're so thin-skinned you won't take honest criticism, I won't bother to rate this. If they aren't in IMG codes, the cards don't exist.