Archetype around 'The 7 deadly sins'

[Gamernation]

Disclaimer:

**Cards have full text boxes

**I tried to be as realistic and professional as I could

**I tried to balance out the archtype

***I personally recommend to look at them through my order below. 

 

>>>http://imgur.com/a/nTMmY<<< 

 

Explanation:

       I wanted to make a deck that would be splashable with other decks. Most cards would work with other decks as I am sure you will notice.

 

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>>> Treble force, at first, was to have you and your opponent send one card from the extra deck to the graveyard, but seemed way to strong.) 

 

>>> Pride is my favorite concept. I hope a similar hand trap is printed one day.

 

>>> The deck is a much more consistent version of Dark World that has more options to plays.

 

>>> I made some of the cards with options so the deck would not be super "helmet." 

 

>>>Psy-frame-lord would probably be banned because of this deck. Lots of combos.  

 

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 Here are the cards individually: :Snoop Dogg:

http://imgur.com/GQkYENk  HellFire: Wrath 

http://imgur.com/g7mpLap   HellFire: Greed

http://imgur.com/iRK7Wi7    HellFie: Gluttony

http://imgur.com/4HX81X3   HellFire: Lust

http://imgur.com/goLeOeq   HellFire: Pride

http://imgur.com/3J8Sckh    HellFire: Sloth

http://imgur.com/sEKapKu   HellFire: Envy

http://imgur.com/jLuXhGO   HellFire Lair

http://imgur.com/AfpmDPe   HellFire Gates

http://imgur.com/5n2Usra    HellFire Cerberus

http://imgur.com/bKuw719   HellFire Destruction Plane

http://imgur.com/icsKbNR    HellFire Forceful Evasion 

http://imgur.com/Er2zGyt     HellFire Chronicles

http://imgur.com/4n17mNB  HellFire Hypnotic Force

http://imgur.com/n6UOxqc   HellFire Treble Force (see above for my comment)

http://imgur.com/uAre0D6    HellFire The Tormented Flames

http://imgur.com/wYdDlGF   HellFire The Tormenting Soul

http://imgur.com/Qf9VUGT  HellFire The Ultimate Torment 

http://imgur.com/YCeSNI1   ErrorZone! (Counters the deck for other players to side/mirror match) 

 

 

 

I hope you enjoyed my deck. Feel free to leave some opinions, reactions, or feedback. Thank you.  ::

-GamerNation 

[Airride]

I get that this is casual cards, and I also get that you're a new user, but I want to be clear; The fact that these cards activate off of being sent to the graveyard in general is busted. I mean, look at Burning Abyss; Even after significant nerfs on the banlist, they're still a powerhouse. Why? They get strong effects from being sent to the graveyard from anywhere; the deck, the hand, as Xyz Material, etc. These are pretty much just level 4 Burning Abys. Not a good thing, considering how busted the Level 8 Synchro and Rank 4 Xyz pool are in comparison to the Level 6/Rank 3 pool BA have access to. Also these guys enable themselves way more, since there's a surprising amount of discard costs that aren't costs because you're enabling more effects.

 

Also on a more nitpicky note, the effects don't really match up with the sins. Wrath and Gluttony kinda make sense, but the others...Don't really. Even Amorphages make more sense, and they weren't even really designed around that theme.

 

I'd also like to point out if you admit a card should be banned in combination with your cards...there's probably something wrong with your cards. Or that card, rarely.

 

And also, Pride is busted. Hand trap that avoids destruction avoidance and traditional way of getting rid of removal Spell/Traps? Ew. Plus, returning to the deck is generally a big deal. The drawback doesn't even matter much, since it's the opponent's turn...

[Gamernation]

I get that this is casual cards, and I also get that you're a new user, but I want to be clear; The fact that these cards activate off of being sent to the graveyard in general is busted. I mean, look at Burning Abyss; Even after significant nerfs on the banlist, they're still a powerhouse. Why? They get strong effects from being sent to the graveyard from anywhere; the deck, the hand, as Xyz Material, etc. These are pretty much just level 4 Burning Abys. Not a good thing, considering how busted the Level 8 Synchro and Rank 4 Xyz pool are in comparison to the Level 6/Rank 3 pool BA have access to. Also these guys enable themselves way more, since there's a surprising amount of discard costs that aren't costs because you're enabling more effects.

 

Firstly, I do not think it is fair to start off with "you're a new user." I have my experiences with the card game and the longevity of my account does not reflect anything. I want feedback based on the designs, not my account.

 

Now, back to your comments. This was the point of the deck. I suppose I can say "when this card is sent to the graveyard by a card effect ," but that seems like a watered version. I think that considering the meta, a deck like this would instantly become one of the best decks, but there is a lot of support to stop the deck. Imperial iron walls would break the deck. Dimension fissure, masked hero dark law, and others would slow the deck down significantly. And, as far as going first, most cards cannot play their effects "the turn it is sent to the graveyard." Only the traps would make a difference on the opponents turn. As for Pride, I think that is a card we can use. Perhaps changing it to "return to the owner's hand." so it would be like wasting a normal summon. But, now you go neg 1 since your grave is useless that turn.

 

But, after taking what you said into consideration, and I thinking of these edits:

 

Gluttony: when this card is destroyed by battle or card effect as opposed to "sent to the grave."

Lust: Sent to the grave yard by a card effect

Pride: Skip your next draw phase (as opposed to the graveyard lock)

Envy: Sent to the grave yard by a card effect

Sloth: Fine

Wrath: everything the same except with the banishing face-up. Too much. Being sent to the grave yard is a great effect in itself. 

Greed: Fine. Makes greed splashable to search another copy of himself

 

 

 

 

For now it's in alpha mode, so thank you for your insight.