Surrounded in Darkness Booster - LOOK AND COMMENT - UPDATED 14/60 cards

[Thegenim]

Hello everyone, i am Martin, also known as Thegenim, this is my first attempt to make a card so i expect to make OCG errors and such.

I have set myself a task in which I am going to make a complete 60 card set for a booster pack which would be called "Surrounded in Darkness" having the letters SRD on the cards.

 

Although the pack will contain dark cards there will also be many others, the pack is not really based on darkness, just on being able to win a duel or making your opponent lose quicker. Also the cards will mainly focus on dark world and venom cards, mainly due to the lack of decent venom cards, and because dark world cards are my favourite,

 

image credit to: Helder Pereiro - again.

 

 

image credit to: Gerardo Sandoval -

 

Effect: This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Summoning of the End". This card can't be targeted, and is unaffected by your opponents spell. trap or monster card effects. If this card is face up on your side of the field for 7 of the your standby phases the controller of this card wins the duel. If this card is destroyed by battle, it is sent to removed from play instead, when this card is removed from play immediately send 1 "Save the End of the World" from your graveyard to removed from play, if you can't you lose the duel. During each of your draw phases draw 2 cards, you must put into play one of these cards and discard the other, if you can't play a card then this card is destroyed and is sent to the graveyard, both cards remain in your hand. If a monster requires a tribute you must still provide the tributes. While this card is face up on the field only your opponent can activate spell and trap cards, also you may not declare an attack with any monster on your side of the field.

 

image credit to myself

 

image credit:

1) Helder Pereiro -

2) ~xACx -

 

image credit: Helder Pereiro -

 

* With thanx to Cannon fodder for ideas for effect *

 

Effect:

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "War on a Different Dimension". This monsters atk and def increases by 500atk points for each "dark world" monster in your graveyard. If a magic, trap or monster effect is activated then you may remove from play one dark world monster from your graveyard to negate the activation and effect of it, then destroy the card (unless it is a monster effect). If the you have sent 10 "dark world" monsters to removed from play due to this effect you win the duel. If the atk or defence of this monster becomes less than 2000 then this card is removed from play.

 

Image Credit to: leonard-ART

 

* With thanx to Cannon fodder for the name *

 

 

UNORDERED:

 

Image credit : Gabeszntx

 

Effect:

This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by offering 3 "Venom" monsters as a tribute. Once per turn, you can choose and activate one of the following effects. If you activate an effect, this monster cannot attack this turn.:

- You can place up to 3 Venom Counters on 3 different monsters your opponent controls.

- You can remove up to 3 Venom Counters from up to 3 opponents monsters to increase up to 3 face up "Venom" monsters ATK points by 700 points until your end phase .

 

Image credit: Louskan

 

Image credit: Tevy

 

Image credit: `yrindale

 

Image credit: Schieben

 

Image Credit: sighthoundlady

 

Image credit: P-N-E

 

Picture credit: firjakno

Erm, must change this one =P

 

Picture credit: SaturnGrl

 

 

Cards in Booster:

 

* Dark creator of the dark world - ritual

* Summoning of the end - ritual spell

* Save the end of the world - spell

* Dimension twister of dark world - ritual

* War on a different dimension - ritual spell

* Venom master - effect

* Venom Boa #2 - effect

* Anti-Venom - trap

* Needle Worm the Darkest Form - effect

* Spell Swap - spell

* Venom Servant of the Snake King - monster

* Servants Power - equip spell

* Venom Bite - continuous trap

* Reign of Venom - Continuous trap

* Venom Boa United - fusion/effect

* Great Blue Heron - effect

* Swamp Venom - effect

* Betrayer of Venom - effect

* Injury - quick play spell

* Constant Reminder - continuous spell

* Gateway to the King - continuous spell

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if i said what they did, that'd leave no excitement =P, so you will just have to keep checking back =]

[Cannon-Fodder]

They're not too bad Martin, a few OCG errors, but thats to be expected. I look forward to the entire booster.

[griffon master]

cool...look for my card so far i got 8 cards here is one of my favs.

 

[CinnamonStar]

Hello there^.^

It's always nice to see new members who put some ffort into their creations, which you obviously do.

Now I like the pictures, but there are a couple of OCG errors and the first card is quite overpowered.

However, since you're a beginner and I always consider that, I'll give you 7/10.^.^

[Thegenim]

thank you raven, it is quite over powered maybe however there are some obvious weaknesses to it, for example, if the opponent had a ground collapse in play the controller of dark creator would not be able to destroy it, and also that would reduce the available spaces for monster to 1 (including the dark creator), and so in total there would be 7 (including field card zone) 7 cards, 7 turns, and u can only tribute 5 or 6 star monster pressuming ur other one isnt destroyed.... so would be close shave

[Thegenim]

BUMP

[Parallel Gunshot]

i opened this and saw

New Member

I thought OMG NO!

turns out they are much better than expected

few OCGs etc and a bit over powered.

im a beginner doing a booster pack like this

and i know how difficult it can be

 

7.9/10

i look forward to the full pack

^_^

[pupil]

Cool

[Cannon-Fodder]

Starting to look like a set now, pretty good. I would make a booster myself, its just a case of actually going through with it >_>

[RiffMaster Alex]

Well done for a newbie. There are a few OCG errors and som of the effects are really long... Try shortening them so that they are less overpowered. 7/10

[Thegenim]

UPDATED 10/60 CARDS !!!

[Phatt Mann]

Wow...they're....uh....cool! keep up the good work!

[Thegenim]

WOW, thanx everyone

[schyshter]

some of the best cards i've seen created by a newbie!

 

good job! *thumbs up*

 

the first card has areal long and complicated effect. try shortening it without changing the effect (much). ti seems balanced to me though.

 

like the other's said, some ocg errors, but nothing drastic.

 

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can't wait to see the rest!

[v8561v]

WOW!Your cards are a bit overpowered,and the text is too short!!(sarcasm)

But,you did well...for awile,nOOb!hahaha!!

....kidding.I'm waiting for your set!!

[Thegenim]

Update - 4 cards

[afalpi]

Great cards, only some OCG errors n a little overpowering. Anyway I like them i dunno y so ill give them 8.5/10