[Written] Time Deal

[Monarch King]

Normal Trap Card

 

Send any number of cards from your hand to the Graveyard (max. 2); your opponent skips an equal number of their next Draw Phases.

[EndUser]

I recommend "send from your hand to your Graveyard" instead of "discard". It has a very good effect, so you want to eliminate any unecessary advantage.

 

As per the effect itself: It's basically a... more balanced Time Seal, but it becomes even better if you choose to drop 2 cards. If you pull it off, it's basically a dull game winner, so no. Too good.

[Monarch King]

I recommend "send from your hand to your Graveyard" instead of "discard". It has a very good effect, so you want to eliminate any unecessary advantage.

 

As per the effect itself: It's basically a... more balanced Time Seal, but it becomes even better if you choose to drop 2 cards. If you pull it off, it's basically a dull game winner, so no. Too good.

Ok. I made it "Send" instead of "Discard". I don't know if I should put a restriction.

[AL2X]

It looks too overpowered. Sending 2 cards from your hand and giving your opponent a huge disadvantage? That seems unfair.

It would be more appropriate if you would send three cards in exchange for your opponent skipping their next draw phase (or 6 for the next two draw phases). That would make it more balanced.

[NecroLordX]

Luls, this card is very dangerous. You can use it in Burning Abyss, it will be a -0 to you and -2 to the enemy.