First Real Creation in Over 7 Years, Xyz Rainbow Dash!

[kento_fumasu]

I figured I'd take a crack at designing a decent and well-balanced Xyz monster,

and also try an MLP themed set in the process~ :3

 

 

2 Level 4 Winged Beast Monsters

Once per turn during your Main Phase 1: You can detach 1 Xyz

Material from this card, then target 1 Winged Beast monster you

control; It can attack twice this turn. If this card is destroyed by

battle: You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 Winged Beast monster

from your Graveyard.

[TF2_The_Scout]

Slight OCG correction.

 

2 Level 4 Winged Beast Monsters

Once per turn during your Main Phase 1: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, then target 1 Winged Beast monster you control; It can attack twice this turn. If this card is destroyed by battle: You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 WIND monster from your Graveyard.

 

Winged Beast is not a hyphenated word and you don't target as an effect. Attributes are in all caps and you don't have to say to summon to the field. Where else are you going to summon to? The Graveyard?

 

Yo, this would be da bomb diggity(God, did I really just say that?) in Harpies and Raidraptors, oh and Blackwings. Those archetypes would definitely welcome the ability to attack multiple times and OTK. Though, the float effect is what gets me. Why not change it to Winged Beasts instead of WIND monsters that way it could be more useful in other Winged Beast decks instead of just Harpies?

[kento_fumasu]

I still have the old wording in my head when building card effects. :P

All the revisions look great to me! Thank you!

[TF2_The_Scout]

Please note that all edits go in the first post, not later down in the thread.

[kento_fumasu]

I haven't been on this site in years. So the etiquette for posting was long-forgotten...