youri012 Posted January 21, 2017 Report Share Posted January 21, 2017 So after my return here after a long time and me starting over here again blablabla...I just started a new archetype, and as of now I have made 4 cards. Keep in mind that this is supposed to get bigger some time. Feedback is much appreciated! :) Effect: When this card is sent to the Graveyard: Add 1 ''Dark-Eyes Dystopia Dragon'' from your Deck to your Hand. You can banish this card from your Graveyard: Banish cards from the top of your opponent's Deck face-down, up to the number of "Dystopia" monsters you control. Effect: When this card is targeted for an attack: You can negate the attack, and if you do, banish this card, then you can Special Summon 1 ''Dark-Eyes Dystopia Dragon'' from your Hand, Deck or Graveyard. During either player's turn, when a card or effect is activated that targets this face-up card (except during the Damage Step): You can Special Summon 1 "Dark-Eyes Dystopia Dragon" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. You can only use 1 "Maiden of Dystopia" effect per turn, and only once that turn. Effect: When this card is Normal Summoned, send it to the Graveyard: Special Summon it from the Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. During the End Phase, if this card was Special Summoned: change it to face-down Defense Position. When this card is flipped face-up: Banish cards from the top of your opponent's Deck face-down, up to the number of ''Dystopia'' monsters you control and in your Graveyard. Effect: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Special Summoned: Banish cards from the top of your opponent's Deck face-down, up to the number of ''Dystopia'' monsters you control. Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 ''Dark-Eyes Dystopia Dragon'' from your Graveyard. During the End Phase, change this card to face-down Defense Position. When this card is flipped face-up: target up to 3 of your opponent's face-down banished cards and flip them face up; your opponent loses Life equal to the number of Monster Cards flipped face-up this way x 500. **UPDATE: 4 MORE CARDS** Effect: Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points: Special Summon 1 ''Dystopia'' monster from your Hand or Graveyard in face-up Attack Position. Effect: When a face-down card in your opponent's Banished Zone is flipped face up, you can Special Summon this card from your hand in face-up Defense Position. You can only Special Summon 1 ''Dystopia Magician'' each turn. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard as a result of battle or by an opponent's card effect, Banish cards from the top of your opponent's Deck face-down up to the number of ''Dystopia'' monsters in your Graveyard. Effect: When this card battles an opponent's monster, if your opponent has 3 or more face-down cards in their Banished Zone, this card gains 1000 ATK during Damage Calculation only. If damage calculation is performed involving this card, at the end of the Battle Phase: You can target 1 Level 1 ''Dystopia'' Tuner Monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon that target. Effect: 2 Level 8 monstersWhen this card battles an opponent's monster, if this card's ATK is higher than that monster's ATK; Banish cards from the top of your opponent's Deck face-down, equal to that monster's Level. Once per turn: you can detach 1 Xyz-material from this card; target a number of face-down cards in your opponent's Banished Zone equal to the number of ''Dystopia'' monsters in your Graveyard and turn them face-up; your opponent loses Life equal to the number of cards flipped face-up during this turn x 400. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twizzle 60 Posted January 22, 2017 Report Share Posted January 22, 2017 Nice archetype man! Seems really solid :DMy only possible amendment would be to make Priestess of Dystopia's search effect a hard OPT, to avoid potential Wonder Wand & Trade-In shenanigans.The cards overall seem balanced, and Chaotic Dystopia Dragon is generic sync but not overpowered. Pretty unique effect as well!I'd recommend you make some more cards honestly ;p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
youri012 Posted January 22, 2017 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2017 Nice archetype man! Seems really solid :D My only possible amendment would be to make Priestess of Dystopia's search effect a hard OPT, to avoid potential Wonder Wand & Trade-In shenanigans. The cards overall seem balanced, and Chaotic Dystopia Dragon is generic sync but not overpowered. Pretty unique effect as well! I'd recommend you make some more cards honestly ;pThanks for your response to my cards, I'm glad you like them. As for the Priestess, yeah I might just do that. I believe that already came to mind while making it but I just forgot to type that in hahaha. Well, I am working on more cards, but I'll wait with posting them when I have a big bunch of new cards to post all at once :). It's pretty hard to come up with all kinds of original effects, tho I feel like I got something pretty neat with this banish-face-down-to-burn-your-opponent thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MUDKIPISAWESOME!!! Posted January 23, 2017 Report Share Posted January 23, 2017 Yay, another Archetype that Banishes cards Face-Down! If you're looking for more ideas, go take a look at my Post for the Stormfront Archtype - it also carries a focus on Banishing Face-Down, and you might find stuff you like! Also, I like the cards, DE-DD looks like it could do fun things when mixed with Felgrand in a deck, Chaotic is generic but not too generic, Priestess doesn't need to be on the Field to do anything, and Maiden Special Summons during opponent's Battle Phase, always fun. BTW, where'd you find the art for Maiden? I feel like I've seen it somewhere before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
youri012 Posted January 29, 2017 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2017 Yay, another Archetype that Banishes cards Face-Down! If you're looking for more ideas, go take a look at my Post for the Stormfront Archtype - it also carries a focus on Banishing Face-Down, and you might find stuff you like! Also, I like the cards, DE-DD looks like it could do fun things when mixed with Felgrand in a deck, Chaotic is generic but not too generic, Priestess doesn't need to be on the Field to do anything, and Maiden Special Summons during opponent's Battle Phase, always fun. BTW, where'd you find the art for Maiden? I feel like I've seen it somewhere before.Thanks! I'll have a look at it sometime soon. Thanks again for the commentary :). I think I got that art from Jazin Kay's photobucket. I'm not 100% sure on that tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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