Smashfan120 Posted April 18, 2008 Report Share Posted April 18, 2008 Hey this is my first card and i want u to rate it from 1-5.1 being the worst 5 being the best.I'll post more soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted April 18, 2008 Report Share Posted April 18, 2008 1. if its an effect monster card, don't put once more effect in the type of monster;2. There can only write only 1 Type of monster ---> Dragon or Pyro you have to chose just 1;3. If its an effect monster don't put a description of him , just put the effect;4. Work on your OCG. overall 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smashfan120 Posted April 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2008 Hey is this one better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted April 18, 2008 Report Share Posted April 18, 2008 Agree with dark spine and will somebody plz look at my rob lucci cards. good try 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
animetor07 Posted April 18, 2008 Report Share Posted April 18, 2008 lol this doesn't sound like a yu-gi-oh card at all.. make sure you follow the 4 steps posted above.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted April 19, 2008 Report Share Posted April 19, 2008 the second is alittle better 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted April 19, 2008 Report Share Posted April 19, 2008 Hey is this one better. 1. Don't ever put a description of a monster unless its a normal monster2. The ocg could have been better if you do it like this :"Bowser" + "Bowser" + "Bowser. This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. and then put the effect. And it should be perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smashfan120 Posted April 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2008 thx for the advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FreezingNinja Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 the first card 2/10 the second card 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Combie Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 OCG please. 4/10 for the first. 5/10 for the second. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Larxene Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Ignore this post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solarice04 Posted April 25, 2008 Report Share Posted April 25, 2008 Better. Much Better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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