Raidraptor - Plasma Strix (this is Plasma Hawk REDUX)

[ABC Gun]

(Artwork for this card done by http://cardfight.wikia.com/wiki/Genesis_Beast,_Destiny_Guardian)
 
This post is a REDUX of my older post "Raidraptor - Plasma Hawk", don't go to it I locked it
 
An Xyz Evolution monster that can be Xyz Summoned using any Rank 8 or lower Raidraptor you control, without using a Rank-Up-Magic. If it leaves the field because of your opponent, it can revive any other Raidraptor Xyz Monster from your Graveyard, and attach 2 Raidraptors to it. Oh, and just for kicks, it can burn your opponent depending on the total number of Raidraptor cards and also other cards that have Raidraptor in their effects, but you have detach 3 Xyz Materials from ANY Raidraptor(s) you control. Have fun :: 

 

3 or more Level 9 monsters
Must be Xyz Summoned, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. You can also Xyz Summon this card by using 1 face-up Rank 8 or lower "Raidraptor" Xyz Monster you control as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) If this card is destroyed by battle with an opponent's attacking monster, or if it leaves the field by an opponent's card/effect or for a Summon: You can target 1 other "Raidraptor" Xyz Monster in your Graveyard, then target up to 2 "Raidraptor" monsters with Levels in your Graveyard; Special Summon the first target, and attach the other targets to that monster as Xyz Material. Once per turn, during either player's Main Phase: You can detach 3 Xyz Materials from a face-up "Raidraptor" Xyz Monster(s) you control; inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of "Raidraptor" cards and/or cards that list "Raidraptor" in their effects in your Graveyard x 300, except any cards detached to activate this effect. (this is a Quick Effect).

[Fruiota_Hiroshi]

For comparison, I found the original post (https://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/362357-raidraptor-plasma-hawk/). It seems like you've added to its list of effects.

 

First of all, you made it a lot like Galaxy-Eyes Dark Matter Dragon in that it can Xyz Summon itself using a monster you control that fits certain conditions. Though it is certainly a useful ability, all you would need on the field is a Fiend Eagle, Blade Burner, or Force Strix (low-Rank RR monsters that only require 2 Xyz Materials), and voila, you have the perfect opportunity to get a free 2700 beatstick that, when destroyed, can bring back another RR Xyz Monster (maybe the one you used to Summon it) and give it 2 free Xyz Materials.

 

Second of all, that second effect is troublesome. Not only can you Special Summon a RR monster of virtually any Rank from your Extra Deck during either player's turn, but you can also give it Xyz Materials from this card for free if you so choose. I think you should get rid of the idea of Summoning during your opponent's turn, because that's just ridiculous. Also, I suggest you make it so you have to give the new monster at least one of the Xyz Materials from Plasma Strix, so that you can't endlessly Summon more Xyz Monsters to your field.

[ABC Gun]

Just edited this card, kept the first effect, changed the second to burn effect that requires 3 Xyz Materials to activate

[Fruiota_Hiroshi]

Just edited this card, kept the first effect, changed the second to burn effect that requires 3 Xyz Materials to activate

For the burn effect, where are the cards that it's multiplying off of supposed to be? Graveyard, field, hand?

[ABC Gun]

My goof, sorry