Guest KAJN Posted April 19, 2008 Report Share Posted April 19, 2008 Hi everyone this is my first card of the Android set more coming up. Artwork By:Crimson Ninja. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted April 19, 2008 Report Share Posted April 19, 2008 Ok, I do not believe this is unique enough to be counted as a new sub-type though... You are missing a comma after attacks. "When this card declares an attack, " = correct wording decrease is not capped. monster is not cappped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 19, 2008 Report Share Posted April 19, 2008 Thanks I will work on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted April 19, 2008 Report Share Posted April 19, 2008 Do not worry. I was just as bad when I was a bit newer. My OCG is still off. Anyway, did you make this image yourself? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted April 19, 2008 Report Share Posted April 19, 2008 Ok' date=' I do not believe this is unique enough to be counted as a new sub-type though... You are missing a comma after attacks. "When this card declares an attack, " = correct wording decrease is not capped. monster is not cappped.[/quote'] nice idea, but you need to work on all this stuff ^^ >< good luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 20, 2008 Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 God hunter yeah i made it and i made even better i made Gundam, ninjas, dragon and more.YM: Thank you I will Put the new one right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted April 20, 2008 Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 okType needs to be capitalizedyour first card, the word card, doesnt needs to be capitalized, unless its after Monster, or Spell or Trapand it should beopponent's monster (the m isnt capitalized)and decreased, (the d is not capitalized)rating7/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted April 20, 2008 Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 It would not be android type... Just android since it is not a regular type. I liked the first image more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 20, 2008 Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 Really I thought it was horrible. But thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted April 20, 2008 Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 the card was okay,but the image ruined it (4.3/10) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 20, 2008 Report Share Posted April 20, 2008 Yes I knew something wasn't right with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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